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Pure Glass

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New flyer -what dya reckon??
« on: March 04, 2011, 11:54:40 am »
Comments / suggestions welcomed


Lee GLS

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Re: New flyer -what dya reckon??
« Reply #1 on: March 04, 2011, 11:56:12 am »
it looks good, but i think it need window cleaning in bigger writing, and im not sure about the woman having a coffee?

Pure Glass

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Re: New flyer -what dya reckon??
« Reply #2 on: March 04, 2011, 12:20:23 pm »
Thanks Dave - decent, positive observations

Including a free spell check  ;)


VSP Home Care

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Re: New flyer -what dya reckon??
« Reply #3 on: March 04, 2011, 12:42:32 pm »
Very nice mate although you should drop the hotmail address and get your site address, but then I'm a fussy techie  :)

VSP Home Care

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Re: New flyer -what dya reckon??
« Reply #4 on: March 04, 2011, 12:48:28 pm »
Talking of sites, is yours still be done by any chance as I checked and it goes to the hosts site.  Is this why your using the Hotmail addy?

Blue Frog Systems

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Re: New flyer -what dya reckon??
« Reply #5 on: March 04, 2011, 01:16:47 pm »
Deff get a propper email

Also i'd drop the bit that syays the windows might not come up perfect for the first couple of times. What i do is after they have commited and i have all their details, then tell them the windows may have a few marks and i will come back to sort them.
Only those who risk going too far will truly know how far they can actually go

H S and Son

Re: New flyer -what dya reckon??
« Reply #6 on: March 04, 2011, 03:31:01 pm »
Id be careful what you claim on your flyer, its illegal to mis-represent, trading standards would have a field day. No-one on here uses laboratory grade pure water.

Sapphire Window Cleaning

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Re: New flyer -what dya reckon??
« Reply #7 on: March 04, 2011, 03:35:35 pm »
Id be careful what you claim on your flyer, its illegal to mis-represent, trading standards would have a field day. No-one on here uses laboratory grade pure water.



I would re-word that to say "industrial grade pure water"
The TS are clamping down on mis-representations on websites now.


Matt
Reaching parts traditional window cleaners can not reach.

SPE

Re: New flyer -what dya reckon??
« Reply #8 on: March 04, 2011, 07:09:37 pm »

pure glasses sex  :o lol  :D ;D
was that intentional ?
nicely laid out flyer though  ;)

Wc Solutions

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Re: New flyer -what dya reckon??
« Reply #9 on: March 04, 2011, 08:01:47 pm »
looks ok to me but i would def increase the size of 'window cleaning.

not sure about all the text on the back tho! people cant be assed on reading it all, might be better with some more good pics of jobs done .....


windiewasher

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Re: New flyer -what dya reckon??
« Reply #10 on: March 04, 2011, 09:37:55 pm »
look good but.....
far too much info
you need a proper email address
i done leaflets with little response i now have done some excellent leaflets that are getting a great response!
in colour no pics apart from running water bubbles.
then i make it short,sweet in big writing that stands out.
asking questions then at the bottom if you want all the above please contact me now for a free quote.
Takings off all first cleans till march 7th 2014
October  total=  cleaned  extra per month
November = cleaned extra per month
Total £  so far.

Crystal-clear

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Re: New flyer -what dya reckon??
« Reply #11 on: March 04, 2011, 09:40:05 pm »
Doc fancy sharing your simple effective leaflet with us?  ;)

mark mann

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Re: New flyer -what dya reckon??
« Reply #12 on: March 08, 2011, 03:11:32 pm »
well done mate nice leaflet modern looking !!!!!!!!! (who didnt like exclamation marks? lol)
wouldn't have bothered with the teccy stuff. like another guy said on thread, would have added more pics of work on back intead.

most of work i pick up is from folk wanting a reliable window cleaner so i love your strap line - kool

where did you get the flyer done printmarketuk by any chance?  ;D

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