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cannon

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pub letter
« on: January 09, 2011, 04:12:59 pm »
Does anyone have a sales letter directed towards pubs that i could have a peek at.

I want something effective so im sure someone on here will have something 100 times better than anything i could come up with.

karl@carpetcleaners-sunderland.co.uk

Thanks

Len Gribble

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Re: pub letter
« Reply #1 on: January 09, 2011, 05:09:14 pm »
Am pretty sure Steve (aka minty eastenders ;D) has some pictures of mine! Speaks volume  (don’t use them south of Watford) but the pen is mightier than sword sorry ant got one :'(
Always bear in mind that your own resolution to succeed is more important than any other. (Sidcup Kent)

wynne jones

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Re: pub letter
« Reply #2 on: January 09, 2011, 05:58:01 pm »
Len

I've even seen those pics States side  ;D

Here's some good copy.


Before         After


Job done.
It's not expensive, you just can't afford it.

cannon

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Re: pub letter
« Reply #3 on: January 09, 2011, 06:12:12 pm »
Good points

This is what we can do for you blah blah

before                        after

call ...............

Amend to post- I no longer need a letter i need a couple of impresive before and after pics.

I know I should use own but i dont have any, i have a few ok domestic shots but a couple of impressive pub environment before and afters would be better if anyone would be kind enough to let me have a couple.

Ive just put camera in van its gonna permanantly travel with me now i always forget to take it.


wynne jones

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Re: pub letter
« Reply #4 on: January 09, 2011, 06:21:41 pm »
What does Pub Landlord want? Apart from a pint a lager and a white wine for the good lady. ;D

Clean carpets

As little disruption as possible

As cheap as possible


That would be a good start.
It's not expensive, you just can't afford it.

Steve. Taylor

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Re: pub letter
« Reply #5 on: January 09, 2011, 07:22:37 pm »
Cannon tell them in the letter if they dont call in 2 weeks your cumming to start a fight ;D

TIME AT THE BAR PLEASE

You’ve heard the moans and groans when the bell rings but take the time to look at your carpets & upholstery before they serve there last orders on you.

Sticky and black our machine will attack making them look like new chewing gum also removed.
The pictures below from the street level night club

Out of hour’s service to suit you

Why wait until it's too late call now & quote STREET LEVEL to receive a discount on scotch guard protection hurry offer ends 15/4/2005

Why replace them?
When you can have them cleaned at a fraction of the cost.

Cleaning for peanuts replacement for ££££

GIVE US A BELL NOW.
Steve T       All the gear but no idea!
www.leatherrepairsouthampton.co.uk

wynne jones

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Re: pub letter
« Reply #6 on: January 09, 2011, 07:33:08 pm »
If someone held a gun to my head (again) and said get a pub clean or else, I would.....


Make a trifold brochure with sed pics and testimonials and GO IN THE PUBS before they open in the morning. And prepared to do a demo as well if need be.
It's not expensive, you just can't afford it.

Steve. Taylor

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Re: pub letter
« Reply #7 on: January 09, 2011, 07:36:59 pm »
Hey wynne you gonna eat all that toast ;D ;D
Steve T       All the gear but no idea!
www.leatherrepairsouthampton.co.uk

wynne jones

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Re: pub letter
« Reply #8 on: January 09, 2011, 07:48:06 pm »
That's the world's fattest man. Was 56 stone. And he's British!

Glad to see we hold some records still.
It's not expensive, you just can't afford it.

cannon

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Re: pub letter
« Reply #9 on: January 09, 2011, 07:53:13 pm »
If someone held a gun to my head (again) and said get a pub clean or else, I would.....


Make a trifold brochure with sed pics and testimonials and GO IN THE PUBS before they open in the morning. And prepared to do a demo as well if need be.

Ive just bought a nice leatherette presentation folder got me training certs, ins etc in. Just havnt got any before/after pics, my own fault for always forgetting the camera :(

I was thinking of a letter then a follow up personal visit.

wynne jones

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Re: pub letter
« Reply #10 on: January 09, 2011, 08:02:08 pm »
That's a good idea. It's just I know a few people who have said that and what they end up doing is sending the letters out. Not getting even one reply and then not physically going round to follow up. But you sound like you are up for it.
It's not expensive, you just can't afford it.

cannon

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Re: pub letter
« Reply #11 on: January 09, 2011, 08:20:22 pm »
2011 is push push push, spent to much time sitting on my ar5e.

Its a bit out of my comfort zone the getting in front of people and selling my self, but its got to be done to get where i want and once i perfect my approach and patter i think ill quite enjoy it, thrill of the chase and all that.


Steve. Taylor

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Re: pub letter
« Reply #12 on: January 09, 2011, 10:26:42 pm »
Steve T       All the gear but no idea!
www.leatherrepairsouthampton.co.uk