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andy east sussex

  • Posts: 1146
my website
« on: August 18, 2010, 06:28:39 pm »
www.acscleans.co.uk     telll me your hounest truth of what you think ( what could be aded or removed) im no good with writing things or computers really sorry it just gets me confused lol. i used vista print website design and added my stuff to it

deeege

  • Posts: 5111
Re: my website
« Reply #1 on: August 18, 2010, 06:36:36 pm »
There's a member on here who will re-word it for you for only £25. I'm of the opinion that it would be money well spent.

 
"....and it's lend me ten pounds, I'll buy you a drink, and mother wake me early in the morning."

wpclean

Re: my website
« Reply #2 on: August 18, 2010, 06:46:57 pm »
To be honest it is a little annoying after getting to the site to then be asked to click to enter !

Wouldnt it be better to just have the site showing immediately ?

Dave Willis

Re: my website
« Reply #3 on: August 18, 2010, 06:52:11 pm »
Erm, don't you have a spell checker?
To be honest, some of the wording is shocking.  :o

Re: my website
« Reply #4 on: August 18, 2010, 06:59:29 pm »
Ionics webshop won't let me in either.I think it's a fashion.

Re: my website
« Reply #5 on: August 18, 2010, 07:05:41 pm »
Ionics webshop won't let me in either.I think it's a fashion.

you ahve to join, then they send you a book and then phone you seeing if you want to buy any thing

Window Washers

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Re: my website
« Reply #6 on: August 18, 2010, 07:22:11 pm »
www.acscleans.co.uk     telll me your hounest truth of what you think ( what could be aded or removed) im no good with writing things or computers really sorry it just gets me confused lol. i used vista print website design and added my stuff to it
<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 Frameset//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/html4/frameset.dtd">
<html lang="en">
<head><title></title>
</head>
<frameset rows="100%">
<frame title="http://www.andyscleaningservices.vpweb.co.uk" src="http://www.andyscleaningservices.vpweb.co.uk" name="mainframe" frameborder="0" noresize="noresize" scrolling="auto">
<noframes>Sorry, you don"t appear to have frame support.
Go here instead - </noframes>
</frameset>


I would use your own hosting to start off with, no seo at all , maybe dont use frames.
If your not willing to learn, No one can help you, If you are determined to learn, No one can stop you ;)

andy east sussex

  • Posts: 1146
Re: my website
« Reply #7 on: August 18, 2010, 07:23:45 pm »
wot the bloody hell is that

Dave Willis

Re: my website
« Reply #8 on: August 18, 2010, 07:44:11 pm »
www.acscleans.co.uk     telll me your hounest truth of what you think ( what could be aded or removed) im no good with writing things or computers really sorry it just gets me confused lol. i used vista print website design and added my stuff to it
<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 Frameset//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/html4/frameset.dtd">
<html lang="en">
<head><title></title>
</head>
<frameset rows="100%">
<frame title="http://www.andyscleaningservices.vpweb.co.uk" src="http://www.andyscleaningservices.vpweb.co.uk" name="mainframe" frameborder="0" noresize="noresize" scrolling="auto">
<noframes>Sorry, you don"t appear to have frame support.
Go here instead - </noframes>
</frameset>


I would use your own hosting to start off with, no seo at all , maybe dont use frames.


You'll have to forgive Ian - he's new and not got the hang of computers yet.  ;D

Window Washers

  • Posts: 9036
Re: my website
« Reply #9 on: August 18, 2010, 07:52:49 pm »
www.acscleans.co.uk     telll me your hounest truth of what you think ( what could be aded or removed) im no good with writing things or computers really sorry it just gets me confused lol. i used vista print website design and added my stuff to it
<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 Frameset//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/html4/frameset.dtd">
<html lang="en">
<head><title></title>
</head>
<frameset rows="100%">
<frame title="http://www.andyscleaningservices.vpweb.co.uk" src="http://www.andyscleaningservices.vpweb.co.uk" name="mainframe" frameborder="0" noresize="noresize" scrolling="auto">
<noframes>Sorry, you don"t appear to have frame support.
Go here instead - </noframes>
</frameset>


I would use your own hosting to start off with, no seo at all , maybe dont use frames.


You'll have to forgive Ian - he's new and not got the hang of computers yet.  ;D
lol Sorry,




Andy, that is what computers see/read you need to change a few things  ;)
If your not willing to learn, No one can help you, If you are determined to learn, No one can stop you ;)

Nathanael Jones

  • Posts: 5596
Re: my website
« Reply #10 on: August 18, 2010, 08:23:47 pm »
You seriously need some SEO, your own hosting, some pictures and at least 1 more page.
Concentrate on selling the services, NOT telling ppl about you. Loose the splash page, its annoying & it'll mean you rank lower in Google.

supernova77

  • Posts: 3547
Re: my website
« Reply #11 on: August 18, 2010, 09:39:37 pm »
Is it a Vistaprint site?

Andy

R W C™

  • Posts: 1649
Re: my website
« Reply #12 on: August 18, 2010, 09:44:50 pm »
Is it a Vistaprint site?

Andy
www.acscleans.co.uk     telll me your hounest truth of what you think ( what could be aded or removed) im no good with writing things or computers really sorry it just gets me confused lol. i used vista print website design and added my stuff to it

Judging by this id say it was  ;D

supernova77

  • Posts: 3547
Re: my website
« Reply #13 on: August 18, 2010, 09:56:21 pm »
Ha ha, its been a long day :)

Andy

martinj

  • Posts: 86
Re: my website
« Reply #14 on: August 19, 2010, 01:16:23 pm »
Hi Andy


Basic web pages are built with a language called HTML which is basically a list of tags - you have a start tag <title> and an end tag </title>, notice the / this denotes an end tag.

These tags tell the browser ( internet explorer, firefox etc ) how to display the webpage, this is why pages may look different in different browsers.

Now, some browsers dont like frames so if you want your site to look the same in a range of browsers you need to take the frames out and use more standard HTML. On a simple site you dont really need frames.

Next, SEO or search engine optimisation. A search engine like google will rank your site based on a range of things, this is a bit of a dark art but basically one of the most important things you need are meta tags. Just another HTML tag they look like this:-

<meta name="description" content="whats in your site" />
   <meta name="keywords" content="window cleaning" />


and they go somewhere between the head tags so on your site it would look like this :

<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 Frameset//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/html4/frameset.dtd">
<html lang="en">
<head><title>PUT A TITLE IN HERE</title>
<meta name="description" content="whats in your site" />
   <meta name="keywords" content="window cleaning" />

</head>
<frameset rows="100%">
<frame title="http://www.andyscleaningservices.vpweb.co.uk" src="http://www.andyscleaningservices.vpweb.co.uk" name="mainframe" frameborder="0" noresize="noresize" scrolling="auto">
<noframes>Sorry, you don"t appear to have frame support.
Go here instead - </noframes>
</frameset>
For now concentrate on the tag <meta name="keywords" content="window cleaning" />

This is the tag that google for example will use to rank your site ( amongst other things ), for simplicity what you write in here google will try to match to what people enter into google to search for your site.

Your keywords should contain some general terms like window cleaning, window cleaner sheffield, commercial window cleaner etc but also some terms that are maybe unique to you, think about what the customer wants / whats unique about your business.
Dont put general terms in like window, cleaning seperately otherwise youll be competing with every other cleaner out there and anyone who has anything to do with windows, glass manufacturers, double glazing companies etc etc.

Hope this helps, also your site should have reasonable grammer and spelling ( use spell checker in word ) and should sell your business, again think about what a customer would want to know - look at other sites for ideas/layout.

I bet your brain hurts now! Any questions more than happy to help ( no cost ) my email is martinjohnstone9@googlemail.com

robbo333

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Re: my website
« Reply #15 on: August 19, 2010, 02:10:31 pm »
Hope this is helpful:

1. Like the yellow at the beginning but I think the black and grey looks a bit 'dirty'. Could that be yellow too, so it follows the theme through?
2. Your logo "ACS' is in capital letters, but your company name 'andy's cleaning services' is lowercase. It should really be initial caps, i.e. 'Andy's Cleaning Services'. Looks more like you mean business too.
3. Your logo on the inside page has not got enough white around; it looks a bit squashed in. On the yellow page it looks good.
4. 'Sussex' must be capital 'S'
5. Text could do with some work and there are some errors that are really bad.
6. Got any pics to put on there? Make it more interesting.
7. For your latest offer, don't bother with a pdf, just put the offer on the page.

Cheers

Pete
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