Clean It Up
UK Window Cleaning Forum => Window Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: mlscontractcleaner on April 04, 2010, 04:59:35 pm
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www.mlscontractcleaningservices.co.uk
If you wouldn't mind taking a quick peep and let me know what you'd change or what you like. It's only just gone live so there's no doubt plenty of improvments that could be made.
Your suggestions please.
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not too bad mate - i dont rate vista prints site tho.
pics let u down with no uniforms but it still def does the job.
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They're old pics and will be replaced shortly.
Why don't you rate Vistaprint sites???
Just curious, that's all.
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looks ok to me but again would look better with uniformed pics.also i dont like the "talk dirty"saying.
just my opinion.
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You've not met some of our customers!!!
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maybe im just being picky mate but,
the "about us" page is more like a life story. People don't want to know that you have came from a catering trade.
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Keep it coming folks, it's all going onboard :)
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Friendly and homely - good for domestic clients.
Agree about life story - your pay and your empire (while meant to be jocular) might grate on some - but keep the bit about being in the Merchant Navy - folk like ex-service/police type backgrounds it lends a certain gravitas. Tosh is the exception that proves that rule. ;D
"Shiney" and "definately" should be shiny and definitely.
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looks good. And you will find you will make improvements as time goes on. But great in the short time. Only neg bit would be your slogan about being dirty. But am sure it will help google bring some punters your way from the young gents who were looking for something else dirty ;D ;D ;D
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Like it!
Would it help if you made the navigation bar bigger...its quite small compared to the rest of the text,dont you think?.
It does the job tho...get it optimised and get it submitted to lots of directories and it will get you work.
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the "Talk dirty to us" bit on the splash page is a bit off putting to be honest. As has already been said, the splash screen does you no favours,.. its one more opportunity for viewers to change their mind and look elsewhere before even seeing your site. You also really need to add some search engine optimisation.
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http://www.crystal-clear-window-cleaning-services.co.uk/home
This is our site and its totally free.Weve still got photos to put up..
Feedback appreciated...
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http://www.crystal-clear-window-cleaning-services.co.uk/home
This is our site and its totally free.Weve still got photos to put up..
Feedback appreciated...
noticed on yr site you clean up to 50ft wfp
n quote "no job to big " u cud struggle on a 6 storey office block in preston then
;D ;D ;D
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yeh good point..have to change the wording a bit :D
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only slightly ma friend or get a friend on here
who cleans higher jeff brimbles ya ma lol ;D
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http://www.crystal-clear-window-cleaning-services.co.uk/home
This is our site and its totally free.Weve still got photos to put up..
Feedback appreciated...
noticed on yr site you clean up to 50ft wfp
n quote "no job to big " u cud struggle on a 6 storey office block in preston then
;D ;D ;D
lammy just coz u struggle on a normal house with ur flexi streamline pole that i used for conservatories!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D
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cheers for pointng that out lammy out still in the early stages buddy
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Jason,.. you really need to add a photo to your home page and a prominent list of locations you cover on at least 2 pages. Then you need to change the page titles to include some of your service names so instead of "Crystal Clear Home Page" it'll be "Window cleaning in Town1 and Town 2". Then read up a bit on meta tags,... it'll really help you get ranked better in Google.
There's no point having a great looking website if no one can find it!
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change your writing style it looks cheap
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http://www.crystal-clear-window-cleaning-services.co.uk/
been edited a bit will be ptting pic up soon
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I think the "Come and talk dirty to us" quote is very unprofessional and a bit chavy to say least but like you say there's plenty of room for improvement
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This is my website www.ivesons.net i've still got to design the whole bloody thing ::) ;D
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This is my website www.ivesons.net i've still got to design the whole bloody thing ::) ;D
'website coming soon' i like it haha ;D ;D
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Your hook line "Come an talk dirty to us" are you using that on all other marketing tools, e.g. vans, uniform, business cards, leaflets, stationery etc.
All forms of marketing / advertising should be uniform so people are aware of your brand. In itself there is not much wrong with your hook line, its different and you want to stand out from the crowd.
Cheers Mark.
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This is my website www.ivesons.net i've still got to design the whole bloody thing ::) ;D
I'd put where you operate on there.....
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I think the "Come and talk dirty to us" quote is very unprofessional and a bit chavy to say least but like you say there's plenty of room for improvement
I'd disagree with that.
I think it stands out from the usual boring pun about panes etc.
I have seen other interesting memory hooks:
Builder: Satisfaction guaranteed with every erection!
Decorating service: Get well plastered!
It is a memory hook and if you remember it then it has served it's purpose.
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hi
the website will have all that info on the splash page is just temp i am designing the proper website at the moment and will take me ages though to do so thats why i uploaded the splash page
thanks for the input though
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http://www.crystal-clear-window-cleaning-services.co.uk/home
This is our site and its totally free.Weve still got photos to put up..
Feedback appreciated...
noticed on yr site you clean up to 50ft wfp
n quote "no job to big " u cud struggle on a 6 storey office block in preston then
;D ;D ;D
lammy just coz u struggle on a normal house with ur flexi streamline pole that i used for conservatories!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D
no struggle 4 me fella got no end ov poles
at my disposal they r all locked in yr van lol lol ;D ;D ;D
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tags are outdated and might even hamper the search
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red is angry on a website
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just launched my website decided to spend some time on the computer and got it done still needs fine tunning though ;D
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just launched my website decided to spend some time on the computer and got it done still needs fine tunning though ;D
looks good :P