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UK Window Cleaning Forum => Window Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: Sapphire Window Cleaning on May 17, 2009, 12:54:59 pm

Title: wording for websites
Post by: Sapphire Window Cleaning on May 17, 2009, 12:54:59 pm
how would you word your text on your home page of your website, do you use key phrases etc?
this is what I have on my homepage, feel free to advise on anything. Thanks

MB window cleaning, are professional window cleaners with over 12 years experience in the trade.

We offer services to both residential and commercial customers.

We operate both traditional (mop & squeegee) method of cleaning and the pure water technology method, with poles that reach 30ft.

We are based in Stoney Stanton near Hinckley in Leicestershire and cover the whole of Leicestershire, we also cover the areas of Coventry and Rugby.

 

We are fully insured for public liability through   with an indemnity of £5,000,000



We clean:

 

    * Windows
    * Window frames
    * Gutter clearing and unblocking
    * Fascia boards & soffits
    * Conservatory roofs & frames
    *
      Cladding
    *
      Signage





Matt
Title: Re: wording for websites
Post by: Mr Formby on May 17, 2009, 01:31:22 pm
Why not look at some other window cleaning web sites and see how they have worded theres
Title: Re: wording for websites
Post by: Window Washers on May 17, 2009, 03:27:23 pm
maybe have gutter clearance in there somewhere  ;)
Title: Re: wording for websites
Post by: Window Washers on May 17, 2009, 08:48:03 pm
Quote from: Ewan on May 17, 2009, 08:45:49 pm
MB Window Cleaning:
Servicing Leicestershire, Coventry & Rugby


Providing a professional window cleaning service with more than 12 years experience in maintaining residential and commercial properties


Fully insured:    Health & Safety:    Member of the FWC:


Being a smaller business with lower overheads and using the latest methods to window clean “water fed pole systems” enables us to offer our customers a very competitive price.

Please go to the service section for more information.


Contact us today for a free no obligation quote

T:
M:

some of above could work, but shows nothing about working with search engines, common mistake
Title: Re: wording for websites
Post by: Window Washers on May 17, 2009, 09:06:55 pm
Quote from: YWCS on May 17, 2009, 08:59:50 pm
windowwashers,

what did you think about mine? I did attempt to take seo into account, but obviously with such a short piece of text its not easy.

Glenn
Glenn you are having a lugh with me , please tell me you are there is nothing there only a holding page with very little detail :-\

Your welcome to call and have a chat if you like just not tonight
Title: Re: wording for websites
Post by: Window Washers on May 17, 2009, 09:17:46 pm
Quote from: Ewan on May 17, 2009, 09:11:06 pm
If that was all he had on home page, what would be best?

You have only suggested putting gutter clearance in there!


I have alredy spoken to this guy, he follows good advice clearly  ;D



YWCS I can see where your going with what you put, and it is the right path tweaked a little ;)
Title: Re: wording for websites
Post by: Sapphire Window Cleaning on May 18, 2009, 07:51:07 am
Thanks guys much appreiciate all the advice.






Matt