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UK Floor Cleaning Forum => Carpet Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: derek west on May 05, 2009, 10:41:03 am

Title: headline needed
Post by: derek west on May 05, 2009, 10:41:03 am

need a catchy headline  for 2 add mags i advertise in.
at the moment ive got

"beautiful fresh clean carpets"
"thats our promise to you".

need something with 2 lines of text, header and then a sub header, roughly same length of text as above.

any help would be appreciated.

winning headline gets a cheque for £5 to buy beer with. (seriously)
unless you use a glide then you can buy some baby sham ;D

derek

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: JandS on May 05, 2009, 10:58:29 am

Can't think of anything at the mo but I would ditch the word beautiful.

John

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: derek west on May 05, 2009, 11:03:33 am

i wanna ditch them all john
get your thinking cap on and that life changing cheque could be on its way to you ;D
derek
ps...
competition closing date is the 8th of may, entrants must be over the age of 18,
entries after the closing date will not be used but may still be charged ;D

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: robert meldrum on May 05, 2009, 11:12:13 am

What's wrong with your original name " Affordable Carpet Cleaning " or are you aiming upmarket to the snob sector " If You Need To Ask You Can't Afford Us "

Having said that................I've found the vast majority of snobbery to be in council estates !!!

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: derek west on May 05, 2009, 11:16:55 am

still affordable cleaners bob.
just after a catch line for my advert.
come on! you could put it towards a wee dram ;D
derek

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: Dennis on May 05, 2009, 11:42:07 am

Safe Sex!
On your Affordably Cleaned carpets

See and feel the difference
On your Affordably Cleaned carpets

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: derek west on May 05, 2009, 11:44:40 am

well the first one will definately get there attention ;D
derek

right! off to prontaprint to get the outlines drawn up, i can put the winning headline in last.

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: daysdeepclean on May 05, 2009, 11:55:35 am

"Top Quality Carpet Cleaning"
   "At a Price You Can Afford"

         "When We Clean Your Carpets"
"You can See, Smell & Feel The Freshness" (Or change freshness for "The Difference")

"Don't Gamble When Choosing a Carpet Cleaner"
    "Our Quality of Service is Second to None!"

I'm off to another job now..... I'll see what other crap I come up with ;D

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: derek west on May 05, 2009, 12:04:45 pm

i like them colin, a lak em a lot ;D
derek

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: clinton on May 05, 2009, 02:10:38 pm

Think we deserve a fiver for trying ;D

Why dont you change your name derek like paul is ???

How about northwichs sexeist carpet cleaner ;D ;D

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: Joe H on May 05, 2009, 02:44:10 pm

Must be the only carpet cleaner in Northwich then  ;D

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: Glynn on May 05, 2009, 02:49:03 pm

One we use,
"Remember - When choosing a Carpet Cleaner, quality doesn't come cheap but we offer a service that we believe price wise & quality wise cannot be beat".........

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: clinton on May 05, 2009, 03:08:26 pm

Joe

I forgot that ;D ;D

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: markpowell on May 05, 2009, 03:20:27 pm

"A Clean Home Is A Healthy Home" with a pic of a baby crawling on a cream carpet.
"Carpets Showing You Up?"
Remember how your carpets used to look, feel and smell?
Mark

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: mmartin on May 05, 2009, 04:06:59 pm

Hi derek

"carpets dry as we say goodbye"

"we offer the promise that other companies
promise to offer"

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: mmartin on May 05, 2009, 04:15:06 pm

Hi derek

If i win donate the cheque to chariteeeee mate

mike

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: Doctor Carpet (Ret'd) on May 05, 2009, 05:22:51 pm

Cleanliness is next to Godliness................but only in an Irish dictionary ;D




(No offence intended to anybody who is thinking of taking offence......or a gate or a potting shed.) ;D ;D

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: clinton on May 05, 2009, 06:28:03 pm

 ;D

Give us some of them litle pils doc ;D

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: daysdeepclean on May 05, 2009, 07:38:19 pm

"Thinking Of Hiring A Rug Doctor?"
"Don't Bother, They're pooe!"  ;D

       "Splash And Dash"
"For a Fraction Of Your Cash"  ;D

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: Buster Ingram on May 05, 2009, 07:53:41 pm

Go with West for the Best Rug Sucker

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: Ryan Smyth on May 05, 2009, 07:54:41 pm

Very good Doc ;D ;D ;D

Ryan

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: carpetworx on May 06, 2009, 09:47:05 am

You'll never walk alone
when you walk on fresh clean carpet
from affordable carpet clean.

So don't be shy,just call and say hi.
Same day booking available now.

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: daysdeepclean on May 08, 2009, 06:46:14 pm

After a few ales (One was called "Ginger Tosser" at 3.8%) at the Flora Dance in Helston, my father in law has given me my new "Tag Line"....

       "Days Deepclean Services"
"Rediscover the true colour of your carpets"

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: derek west on May 08, 2009, 07:28:46 pm

can i nick it
yes ya can

can iiiiiii nick it
yes ya can


like that colin. might be worth a fiver just for the tag line. ;D
derek

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: daysdeepclean on May 08, 2009, 11:20:22 pm

Get yersel a Mc D's Breaky with that fiver mate..... We all deserve a decent bit of scran in the mornings ;)

My advice is free mate, and honoured if it's acted upon!!!!

Thanks Derek.. Col....

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: Ricky M on May 08, 2009, 11:48:58 pm

it for your families needs !

Care for you !

Stop being a tight c@nt eh pet !!!!!!!!!!!!!!    ;D ;D ;D ;D

Title: Re: headline needed
Post by: Ricky M on May 08, 2009, 11:49:27 pm

I like the 3rd
 ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D