Clean It Up
UK Window Cleaning Forum => Window Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: chris@c.m.s on March 31, 2009, 06:43:33 pm
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any constructive comments on the website I'm building myself would be appreciated. http://www.cmswindowcleaning.co.uk/
Thanks
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You live just round the corner from where i used to live in penstone close lancing
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Yep that's close :)
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its a bit red
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Yep that's close :)
I used to work for groves window cleaning then ;D
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its a bit red
Yes I think it may be better with the text toned down a little.
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Yep that's close :)
I used to work for groves window cleaning then ;D
yes I see them around quite a bit.
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That because they have got a unit round the corner from you where they fill up all there vans
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Are you going to the Ionics roadshow in Worthing ?
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Are you going to the Ionics roadshow in Worthing ?
No i went to the nec
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its a bit red
Red is a bad colour for any marketing material,.. its subconsciously associated with warning lights, emergencies, stop signs etc,... silly as it sounds it will stop some ppl calling,..
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Was hoping to get to that myself but it looks like the fed one will be my next show, If I ever get around to joining ::)
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Hello Chris,
The colour your using for text is not easy to read and why not other pictures on different pages.
Mark.
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Formed in 2005 should read " Est in 2005"
In my opinion ;)
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Looks really good, nice one.
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I like the look, nice and simple very bright.
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Im not a teacher.
Capital letters at the begining of sentences ;D
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Tags need to be sorted so that you can be found..
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Thanks for all your comments, I think I'm happy enough with it now, though no doubt there will be things to add to it, Chris I think the tags are sorted but its not excepted by the search engines yet, its not quite ready yet so it gives me a little time to sort a few other things out.
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I am very impressed with your design mate, the logo needs put over the image without the box, not sure about where the we clean frames bit is, looks kond of hinden, I know you have put it there so it stands out agains the background, but might work it in some where else. I think you should have your number up there somewhere, and more pictures, the before and after picts are always great, but definately lacks your mark on it.
What I mean is the desing is fantastic, but it doesn't have you on it, picts of your vans, cleaning windows, your employee etc. I get a impersonal feel from it.
You also definately want a payments page.
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Should read, We Provide a professional, reliable & fully insured etc etc
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Established in 2005 We
Small w for we
The web site looks really good 8)
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All sorted thanks again. :)
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Under pure water technology
1. "it's" not "its"
2. IMO instead of "been considered, and now The Water Fed ..." should be "been considered. The Water Fed..." (Because of "now" in the "Law now states")
3. capital "O" for "only."
4. should read "conservatories" (plural) not "conservatory's" (belonging to or part of the conservatory). Small "t" for "Third floor", "etc" for "ect".
5. IMO - it is not the method that often neglects the frames, it is the person, consider re-wording.
On the home page:-
It should be a comma after West Sussex, not a full stop.
...within an 9 mile distance... should be a 9 mile distance
IMO - after area, (comma) should be area; (semi-colon)
We tend to focus... (I would change this to "Our main focus is on" - because you used tend in the previous statement)
Missing comma after "small commercial properties" and put a semi colon after "shop fronts"
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Like it ;D hard to spot the amn in the m.
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site is looking good, I personally would change the location page. I would put your address on the contacts page and make the location page the areas that you cover as it seems a waste to have 2 pages for your contact details.
You defo need to look at your seo as people that do not know your webite adress will not find it very easily at the moment.
Ian
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Thanks Malc will try and get that lot sorted tonight.
Magic 1 There isn't a lot I can do about the logo unfortunately the website building program changes the size of it and it loses some of its clarity it looks good on the polo necks though ;)
Thanks Ian will be looking again at the pages during the week its still very much work in progress ;)
I must admit I'm a little lost with getting it noticed but the host has told me it will be a while before the search engines except the site, there are some optimising tools on site I can use Do I need to use them before it accepted?
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Thanks Malc will try and get that lot sorted tonight.
Magic 1 There isn't a lot I can do about the logo unfortunately the website building program changes the size of it and it loses some of its clarity it looks good on the polo necks though ;)
Thanks Ian will be looking again at the pages during the week its still very much work in progress ;)
I must admit I'm a little lost with getting it noticed but the host has told me it will be a while before the search engines except the site, there are some optimising tools on site I can use Do I need to use them before it accepted?
there are quite a few tricks to get on quicker, linking to the right sites and having a link to you can get you where you want to be quicker, link to every tom dick and harry and it may get you on at top soon to be dropped saying that from experience. I do not know what the optimising tools are so I cannot comment on that side.
As I said before I feel it is a waste the location when could be used for a far better reason that would help you a lot. You are doing great so far ;)