Clean It Up
UK Window Cleaning Forum => Window Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: collins82002 on February 17, 2009, 12:19:59 am
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(http://C:\Users\chris&rach\Documents\sign van1.jpg)
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nice. ;)
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Don't like it. Get rid of the shadow and it will look much sharper. I like the background but you seem to have two different typefaces at least on there. Can the blue under the black be taken away from the bold text?
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what do you mean blue away from black??
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Think he means the main large wording is a mix of blue and black. Dont look so nice on here but prob would look ok on the actual flyer.
Bob
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(http://C:\Users\chris&rach\Documents\van.jpg)
Revised Design
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No, sorry I think I preferred the first one, the writing style at least.
As for the title, I'm not so sure, I likes the first, but the second is nice too! :-\
The writing just looks plain now! :P
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second one is a lot easier to read...................both are a nice
love the back ground
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Hi,
I think the first one looks cool!
I have noticed that some companies like to advertise with very clear lettering, & some companies use less clear lettering, as a kind of quiz/puzzle on people, as they then spend more time looking at these ads until fianally working out what is written.
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Thanks to everyone so far who has given their opinion tomorrow will post my final sign after afew tweeks tonight.
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Like second one better but think I would rather have your name in plain black rather than with white edging but its down to personal choice
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If thats a home number I would take it out saves drunks ringing about 3am
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No do not remove landline ::) i would never employ someone with just a mobile.
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Drop the background back with a transparency about 20 - 30% its nice but too bold and is competing with the text.
For the heading use a black outline with white text and a bolder font will make it stand off the busy background.
The layout isn't balanced with the bullet points so move them into an ordered look, and run the phone numbers underneath along the whole length with a bolder font.
Never use more than two different fonts.
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You mean like this
(http://C:\Users\chris&rach\Documents\sign.jpg)
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very nice mate like the first one the best and the back ground is a1.
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Like the first one best aswell....
Bazz...
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That is very good - "M" should have a full stop after it (or the "G" shouldn't) and not a rule but the "or" should not have a capital "O".
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modified above
Thanks
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Might have sounded a little harsh but i didn't like the first one because on my screen the type just looks fuzzy - a bit like forgetting to put your glasses on. In my opinion it needs to be as clear as possible and as big as you can get away with. Just my opinion. ;)
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It is a little fuzzy on here but it is clear.
Thanks any way.
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can you lighten the background on it ? you want them to see the words first not the picture, if your wanting them to see the picture then maybe put a blade on there and a bucket or a window and wfp