Clean It Up
UK Window Cleaning Forum => Window Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: [GQC] Tim on November 17, 2008, 12:06:22 pm
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Just wondering how this sounds.
I don't know what is correct English on the H&S part, is it :
• Fully Compliant to Health & Safety legislation
or
• Fully Compliant with Health & Safety (legislation?)
? Or is both correct? I'm not a native English speaker, so sometimes it can be confusing. ??? :D
“Quality window cleaning and
Excellent customer service”
Do you need a professional, reliable and fully insured window cleaning service?
X Window Cleaning is expanding their existing client base in your area.
• We clean ALL windows up to 60ft, and clean frames and sills every visit.
• We are Reliable and Regular, with excellent customer references.
• We also clean :
Conservatories, uPVC Guttering, Fascias and Soffits.
• Fully Compliant to Health & Safety legislation
• Windows cleaned Weekly, Fortnightly, Monthly, or Six Weekly.
• Please contact us to arrange a free quotation.
tel
email
Address
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Anyone? I need some help quick, I'm going to print some off in a minute. :)
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wording looks ok to me,
the only thing i would do differant is put conservatory roofs instead of conservatories, also i dont know if this is the finished article or just the wording, but it doesnt look very eye catching or proffesional
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wording looks ok to me,
the only thing i would do differant is put conservatory roofs instead of conservatories, also i dont know if this is the finished article or just the wording, but it doesnt look very eye catching or proffesional
Oh, it's literally just the wording that I copy and pasted. :)
Glad the wording is okay.
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Just wondering how this sounds.
I don't know what is correct English on the H&S part, is it :
• Fully Compliant to Health & Safety legislation
or
• Fully Compliant with Health & Safety (legislation?)
? Or is both correct? I'm not a native English speaker, so sometimes it can be confusing. ??? :D
“Quality window cleaning and
Excellent customer service”
Do you need a professional, reliable and fully insured window cleaning service?
X Window Cleaning is expanding their existing client base in your area.
• We clean ALL windows up to 60ft, and clean frames and sills every visit.
• We are Reliable and Regular, with excellent customer references.
• We also clean :
Conservatories, uPVC Guttering, Fascias and Soffits.
• Fully Compliant to Health & Safety legislation
• Windows cleaned Weekly, Fortnightly, Monthly, or Six Weekly.
• Please contact us to arrange a free quotation.
tel
email
Address
Tim. It definitely should be "Fully Compliant with Health & Safety (legislation?).
Everything else looks fine to me.
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8) sounds good, I really like the first two lines... ;)
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Domestic custys are not really bothered what you use to clean there windows as long as they sparkle.
I been wfp for 2 years now and i never mentioned it once on my leaflets i always get an excellent response from them.
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Tim,
I'd keep it simple if I were you. This is the wording I use, and I 'stole the idea' from another tradesman:
Do you want regular window cleaners?
Who are fully insured.
Who take pride in their work.
We are an established family buinsess that services Chepstow and the surrounding areas.
Call us now for free quote.
It's a nice shiny one with pictures and stuff.