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UK Floor Cleaning Forum => Carpet Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: jasonl on March 31, 2008, 08:50:38 pm

Title: New web site please comment
Post by: jasonl on March 31, 2008, 08:50:38 pm

Hi my new site is on its final draft, a few spellings to correct, does anyone have any errors thay can find?


www.disastermastersuk.co.uk   thanks

Title: Re: New web site please comment
Post by: dan roberts on March 31, 2008, 09:35:18 pm

Hi, in my opinion its not the best, but depends if its a full time business or just beer money.
If its the latter then yes, I think it will do well.

Dan

Title: Re: New web site please comment
Post by: garyj on March 31, 2008, 09:44:03 pm

I would ditch the picture of you on the beach for a start.

Title: Re: New web site please comment
Post by: garyj on March 31, 2008, 09:51:57 pm

Secondly, the links don't work. But still ditch the picture first.

Title: Re: New web site please comment
Post by: dan roberts on March 31, 2008, 09:55:03 pm

I agree, the beach picture doesnt work at all well with the 'I sympathise with your disaster' promise. It looks like you are spending their misery money on Thai Brides and Ping Pong Ball shows!!  ;D

Dan

Title: Re: New web site please comment
Post by: garyj on March 31, 2008, 09:56:44 pm

You're right Dan, there is that angle too.

I would just ditch it because he's ugly  ;D

Title: Re: New web site please comment
Post by: jasonl on March 31, 2008, 10:06:04 pm

Yes the picture is my honey moon in the maldives last month.... my "beer money" is a turnover of 800k in past 6 months lol.

Title: Re: New web site please comment
Post by: martin19842 on March 31, 2008, 10:24:33 pm

jason

i preferred the scirrocco website, i thought it was more crisp, more commercial.

but at the same time it depends what market you are aiming it at,

if you are targetting the domestic policyholder, it may well work, also good choice or website name, on the back of a certain tv series.

regards

martin