Clean It Up
UK Floor Cleaning Forum => Carpet Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: nevil on March 14, 2008, 08:43:24 pm
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Anyone of you more experienced guys fancy giving me a little feedback on my site.
I am not sure about all the intro on me, it spells out that I am a small independent on one hand, but on the other hand it gives customers or potential ones someone that is prepared to be accountable.
www.fresh-prop.co.uk
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Here's my two penneth.
My first impression is, well it's different.
And I think that's a good thing. I like your boxed statement for the demo and personally I would make this the main thing at the top. Like the logo but don't like the outline thing on the right.
Have you got a picture of you smiling? :)
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Why use Extracta scrubba delux if you have the power of a truckmout? ???
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Looks good apart from Begian Wilton photo doesn't really do anything, ie not much contrast in the photo. I think you would be better off with a really dirty plain carpet with a cleaned area really standing out.
The hard part of websites is getting them up the search engines.
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Nevil.
I'm interested and i got BORED reading it. In my opinion you need to give it more impact.
and better pictures cheers m8 Tony
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You have a low moisture cleaning system but prefer the HWE............. well OK
but whos going to "buy" the LM system of clean
I wuold have been saying something like
I use a conventional hot water extraction machine which most carpet manufacturers prefer, and my truck mounted machine is extremely efficient.
However, clients who need their carpets to be dry very quickly, I can offer a safe but very efficient low moisture carpet cleaning system.
Generally, try to cut down on the words used to highlight something, but there is nothing wrong to repeat a feature you want to highlight.
Re Stain removal - I much prefer the term stain treatment - cause as you know not every stain will remove but you can treat every stain with removal in mind.