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UK Window Cleaning Forum => Window Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: Alex Wingrove on September 17, 2007, 07:37:23 pm

Title: Flyer thing pictures mmmmm
Post by: Alex Wingrove on September 17, 2007, 07:37:23 pm

hi

what's this like not anything special but just to stick through the letter boxes when canvassing, will make it into business card aswel

Thanks

(http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y125/beannieman/wcflyer2.jpg)

Title: Re: Flyer thing pictures mmmmm
Post by: russ_clark on September 17, 2007, 07:41:19 pm

You may want to do a spell check on it first Alex

Title: Re: Flyer thing pictures mmmmm
Post by: Dean Aspects on September 17, 2007, 07:44:55 pm

Conservatory... i think!

Dean

Title: Re: Flyer thing pictures mmmmm
Post by: jampot on September 17, 2007, 07:45:48 pm

i think that the design is godd, but, i think that there is toooooo much wording on it. you may find that you will get a better response if the was less text, like the design tho.  ;D

dont just post knock the doors you"l get alot more  ;)

trust me ive done it

Title: Re: Flyer thing pictures mmmmm
Post by: Alex Wingrove on September 17, 2007, 07:49:15 pm

yeah i always do but this is for the ones that arnt in, havn't been out in ages and need to tidy a fee areas up,

what should i get rid of?

photoshop didn't spell check stupid thing!

Title: Re: Flyer thing pictures mmmmm
Post by: Paul Coleman on September 17, 2007, 08:01:21 pm

Quote from: Alex Wingrove on September 17, 2007, 07:37:23 pm

hi

what's this like not anything special but just to stick through the letter boxes when canvassing, will make it into business card aswel

Thanks

(http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y125/beannieman/wcflyer2.jpg)

Looks good to me Alex.  Straightforward and to the point is the best way to do it and you've achieved that.  I like the window cleaner logo on the left.

Title: Re: Flyer thing pictures mmmmm
Post by: jampot on September 17, 2007, 08:02:35 pm

maybe make the cleaning part larger so the first things that you see is what you do. i would put the name and address alot smaller maybe at the bottom. make sure that what you do i bold and stands out so its the first thing they see.

less can somtimes mean more  ;)

Title: Re: Flyer thing pictures mmmmm
Post by: Village Gleam on September 17, 2007, 08:08:39 pm

I liked it, and I am usually very critical. I didn't think it was too wordy and made all the major selling points.

It also gave your name address and home number which inspires trust. I've got a comp name and people are forever asking what my name is and I have to waste words on my leaflet and call myself things like propietor(I do include my name etc).

Title: Re: Flyer thing pictures mmmmm
Post by: Paul Coleman on September 17, 2007, 08:08:44 pm

Mine might be a bit wordy but I did it like that to exclude those who weren't serious about having a regular service.  I would rather have a smaller number of responses which are hopefully from customers who genuinely want what I'm offering.
Mine is nothing special either but seems to get responses.

Title: Re: Flyer thing pictures mmmmm
Post by: Alex Wingrove on September 17, 2007, 09:30:12 pm

that looks nice paul i like the little logo,