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UK Window Cleaning Forum => Window Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: S.A.J on October 17, 2006, 04:43:30 pm

Title: What do you think?
Post by: S.A.J on October 17, 2006, 04:43:30 pm

What do youguys & girls think of my flyer?




Stuart
SAJ Window Cleaners Ltd

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: jeff1 on October 17, 2006, 04:45:55 pm

Go on don't be shy and show us the link then  ;D ;D

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Post by: r4g1t on October 17, 2006, 04:48:09 pm

very nice   where is it ??

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: Fast 1 * on October 17, 2006, 04:50:42 pm

 ??? ???

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: S.A.J on October 17, 2006, 04:53:40 pm

its there now :-[

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: AuRavelling79 on October 17, 2006, 04:58:23 pm

Very good SAJ - tells folk what you do and shows pole to it's full advantage!

But you've got the I and the L transposed in "reliable"

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: Fast 1 * on October 17, 2006, 04:59:56 pm

How about stating what you clean  ie  factories,shops,residential etc.Also maybe a mention of health and safety goes down well.Apart from that,they look nice

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: Fast 1 * on October 17, 2006, 05:02:04 pm

Oh yes and the spelling error

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: Fast 1 * on October 17, 2006, 05:03:38 pm

Sorry i just noticed you have got domestic and commercial. my mistake ;)

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: Sarah Sarill on October 17, 2006, 05:18:55 pm

Very clean Stuart.

Could you post it in the documents to download section so  others can see it as a template for them to adapt.

Sarah

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: busydaffodil on October 17, 2006, 05:24:44 pm

but remove your phone number before you post it in the docs place...you wouldnt want weirdo phonecalls would you?  ;)

Nice flyer though.

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: S.A.J on October 17, 2006, 05:46:34 pm

Cheers guys & girls for your feed back.

Made a few changes

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: Fast 1 * on October 17, 2006, 05:50:08 pm

 ;)

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: windows_chepstow on October 17, 2006, 05:50:55 pm

Saj,

You need to 'tell' your potential punters what to do.  I know this may seem obvious, but the 'marketing people' say this is what you should do.

Something like:

'If you want the services of a regular and professional window cleaner, then phone 123456788 anytime'.

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: S.A.J on October 17, 2006, 06:15:30 pm

Cheers for that Tosh.

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: windows_chepstow on October 17, 2006, 06:20:44 pm

It sounds a bit 'grovelly' with the 'please' and 'thank you' at the end.  I'd take it out, but if you leave it in, put a full stop at the end of the previous sentance before Thank you (two words).

Also, why would a recommendation from a Rugby Club carry any weight?

I assume you're a rugby player, have mates there and like your beer and singing silly songs?

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: S.A.J on October 17, 2006, 06:47:31 pm

No i'm not a rugby player i hate the sport!

everyone in the area i'm about to canvess knows the rugby club or someone that goes to the rugby club. I thought it might help get new customers if they know i clean a local buisness.

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: windows_chepstow on October 17, 2006, 06:49:00 pm

Fair enough!  The logo looks good.

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Post by: macleod on October 17, 2006, 06:57:52 pm

on the left is for the housewives

on the right is for commercial

Title: Re: What do you think?
Post by: S.A.J on October 17, 2006, 07:23:08 pm

Thank You everyone for your input. ;D

Stuart
SAJ Window Cleaners