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UK Window Cleaning Forum => Window Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: nathankaye on September 15, 2017, 02:36:57 am
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I think you mean psychology ::)roll ::)roll
the idea is sound enough, however you may wish to correct a lot of the English language and grammar mistakes before letting it loose on the public.... Even the Donny public may pick up on the mistakes :o :o
;D
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The middle section is too long winded, and 'don't bin me' is not a clear statement, we know straight away what it means but imagine an OAP glancing at the leaflet.
I think it's using an idea that is not needed, do you really think people will bin it, try other cleaners, then wish they had kept it ( I know you don't and it's reverse physiology )
using the points you make on the bottom of the leaflet I think it would make a fantastic leaflet based on the old and well used '5 reason ' technique e.g.:
5 secrets other window cleaners don't want you to know
5reason our customers recommend us to their closest friends
5 reason your neighbours don't want you to read this leaflet
5 reason your home will fall in love with us.
This is my honest opinion, but I often find when people show examples like this they don't want honesty but praise for their great idea, so to cover all bases...... BRILLIANT!! it's great, use it & become rich ;)
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Firstly, it's psychology.
Second. Your use of english in the following section is atrocious, I wouldn't use it for that reason alone.
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Change that, then give it a go, see how it pans out.
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I'd also change your web URL. It looks like your web address is www.inkservices.co.uk
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The idea is great. The wording and grammar let's it down.
I've noticed this with a lot of your stuff like your text messages, they are not worded very well.
Just my thoughts...
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I think you mean psychology ::)roll ::)roll
the idea is sound enough, however you may wish to correct a lot of the English language and grammar mistakes before letting it loose on the public.... Even the Donny public may pick up on the mistakes :o :o
;D
😂😂😂 part of that is the auto correct and not checking what ive typed! !
Glad i stuck it on here before i went ahead and ordered!!
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You should be getting some shut-eye!
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Sorry to be blunt but here goes.
Good grief Nathan that is toe-curlingly bad. You really aren't going to use that are you?
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He's been going 14 years has bought two rounds and even though has never moved from being a one man operator needs
to order fliers, I would say it not his grammar that's the problem, did I mention he also does power washing.
Not trying to be rude but maybe if he stopped farting about and concentrated on doing a decent job the work would come to him.
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Sorry to be blunt but here goes.
Good grief Nathan that is toe-curlingly bad. You really aren't going to use that are you?
Of course not!! Glad someone realised it......
But at half 2 n sleep deprived it seemed a funny idea. But after a couple of hours sleep n at half eight in morning.......not so much 😲😨😨😨
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He's been going 14 years has bought two rounds and even though has never moved from being a one man operator needs
to order fliers, I would say it not his grammar that's the problem, did I mention he also does power washing.
Not trying to be rude but maybe if he stopped farting about and concentrated on doing a decent job the work would come to him.
😲😲😲