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UK Window Cleaning Forum => Window Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: nathankaye on March 10, 2017, 11:37:31 am

Title: introductory video
Post by: nathankaye on March 10, 2017, 11:37:31 am
Just toying with some ideas of an introductory video for my facebook page or main web site as videos have a greater success rate of viewings.
Yes im wearing shades n some clients think i look like im on S.W.A.T team, which is good for making them pay when i come a knocking  ;D
Plus you can get another look at my ugly mug if you choose to watch,

https://youtu.be/0ILycB-DHks
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: ֍Winp®oClean֍ on March 10, 2017, 12:08:42 pm
Little dissapointed Nath, I was expecting a "eyup" rather than "hello"  ;D
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: nathankaye on March 10, 2017, 12:24:38 pm
 :-[
Little dissapointed Nath, I was expecting a "eyup" rather than "hello"  ;D

Aye, know what ya mean.
 ;D ;D
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: GAZZA B on March 10, 2017, 12:41:21 pm
i think it would be better without the dark glasses, customers won't like that
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: Soupy on March 10, 2017, 02:25:19 pm
Turn your phone round the right way.
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: jk999 on March 10, 2017, 05:09:51 pm
😂😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣😅😅😅you need to do another one for first thirty secs video quality wasn't very good and also I would do away with the sunglasses aswell 👍
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: swanson on March 10, 2017, 06:04:03 pm
I thought it was really good mate
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: Stoots on March 10, 2017, 06:21:34 pm
Bit posher than I imagined you being.

Lose the glasses, camera work was shaky and poor lighting. Practice your script so. It flows it was a bit jerky and the fake smiles you kept trying to pull looked awkward.

Good effort  but could be improves
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: duncan h on March 10, 2017, 06:24:59 pm
Dump the specs
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: nathankaye on March 10, 2017, 06:37:15 pm
Cheers for the feedback.
It was a little awkward, i was parked in a public carpark at cusworth park, local to where i work. I noticed people who were originally walking their dogs just standing and watching.

I will loose the glasses when doing the official video, i was quite tired and my eyes showed it. So thought for the trial run just to wear them.
But general vibe is the video is a good idea.
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: duncan h on March 10, 2017, 06:39:42 pm
Try it. Nothing to lose
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: 8weekly on March 10, 2017, 09:06:51 pm
Definitely keep the glasses. I think a false beard would help. Just to make sure no one you know recognises you.






Kidding. It's fine other than a little awkward.
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: G Griffin on March 10, 2017, 09:59:15 pm
I will loose the glasses when doing the official video,
I'd keep the glasses if it's going to be an official video.
It's good to look cool like one of those rappers and appeal to a younger clientele.
You could be like a Yorkshire Honey G.
Honey G By Gum.
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: 8weekly on March 10, 2017, 11:02:18 pm
I will loose the glasses when doing the official video,
I'd keep the glasses if it's going to be an official video.
It's good to look cool like one of those rappers and appeal to a younger clientele.
You could be like a Yorkshire Honey G.
Honey G By Gum.
Should it not be Honey E by gum?
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: G Griffin on March 10, 2017, 11:07:42 pm
I will loose the glasses when doing the official video,
I'd keep the glasses if it's going to be an official video.
It's good to look cool like one of those rappers and appeal to a younger clientele.
You could be like a Yorkshire Honey G.
Honey G By Gum.
Should it not be Honey E by gum?
That works better there isn't a Honey E.
I'm going to have a look at the unofficial video anyway.
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: Pete Thompson on March 10, 2017, 11:10:46 pm
i like the idea.  Customers get to see what you're like etc not some thug.

Sunglasses look ridiculous though.  Maybe you're trying to cover a black eye?
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: G Griffin on March 10, 2017, 11:14:27 pm
"Competitive fees, which I charge....." is waffle, Honey G........I mean, Nathan.
And I'd lose the "hope you're feeling ok" bit too.
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: G Griffin on March 10, 2017, 11:18:59 pm
i like the idea.  Customers get to see what you're like etc not some thug.

Sunglasses look ridiculous though.  Maybe you're trying to cover a black eye?
Make your mind up.
And you shouldn't judge a book by it's cover.
Who'd have thought Nathan would be so camp?
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: 8weekly on March 11, 2017, 07:31:28 am
"Competitive fees, which I charge....." is waffle, Honey G........I mean, Nathan.
And I'd lose the "hope you're feeling ok" bit too.
He needs a rap. I've come up with the first verse:

So you’re looking for a windy that gets yo’ glass real clean,
Well look no further because I’ll make yours sheen.
But I don’t stop there , no I’m the real deal,
Because I also clean up both your frames and sills.
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: nathankaye on March 11, 2017, 07:51:08 am
Could rap to a child theme song;

I am a windoe cleaner
I come from far away
I come to clean your wimdows
I clean them every day

I like to clean your windows
I clean them really good
Just say that magic word and
I'll clean of all that crud


Lol....camp......one of the things i learnt in sales a while ago. For some reason the softer approach works better for selling.
You dont come over as a thug then.
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: 8weekly on March 11, 2017, 07:55:02 am
Could rap to a child theme song;

I am a windoe cleaner
I come from far away
I come to clean your wimdows
I clean them every day

I like to clean your windows
I clean them really good
Just say that magic word and
I'll clean of all that crud


Lol....camp......one of the things i learnt in sales a while ago. For some reason the softer approach works better for selling.
You dont come over as a thug then.
Stick to window cleaning.  ;D
Title: Re: introductory video
Post by: dazmond on March 11, 2017, 09:23:11 am
i think its ok nathan.for domestics i think its good to put a face to the name.id lose the cap and glasses though.no need.

i wouldnt mention competitive prices or ask how their doing and hope their ok?(only when you turn up to clean!). ;D