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UK Window Cleaning Forum => Window Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: nathankaye on June 06, 2016, 11:26:14 am

Title: 2nd attempt, feedback appreciated
Post by: nathankaye on June 06, 2016, 11:26:14 am
Hi guys, hopefully ive taken previous feedback on board and tackled my page being seen via mobile/ tablet  and also desktop.
What do u guys think, any better??
Let me kno if ur viewing via mobile or a desktop ie laptop or pc.
Cheers
Title: Re: 2nd attempt, feedback appreciated
Post by: Clever Forum Name on June 06, 2016, 07:20:51 pm
Link ???
Title: Re: 2nd attempt, feedback appreciated
Post by: nathankaye on June 06, 2016, 08:44:51 pm
Ooops.

http://1NKServices.co.uk

However ive just tried it on a tablet and it still seems to have some issues. But on my samsung it works hie i want it too.
Title: Re: 2nd attempt, feedback appreciated
Post by: Rob clarke on June 06, 2016, 10:12:37 pm
Won't load up on my mobile  ???
Title: Re: 2nd attempt, feedback appreciated
Post by: Stoots on June 07, 2016, 10:02:50 pm
My honest feedback is that it looks ok

its not bad, its not great but just ok imo

no offence
Title: Re: 2nd attempt, feedback appreciated
Post by: Tim James on June 08, 2016, 11:20:57 am
I'd have a nice compny name image and perhaps a logo done for the top of the webpage. Have done this one in less than 3 minutes but think it can certainly make your site look more professional.

(http://s20.postimg.org/52ks2urwt/NKservices.jpg)
Title: Re: 2nd attempt, feedback appreciated
Post by: nathankaye on June 08, 2016, 10:23:00 pm
Quote from: Tim James on June 08, 2016, 11:20:57 am
I'd have a nice compny name image and perhaps a logo done for the top of the webpage. Have done this one in less than 3 minutes but think it can certainly make your site look more professional.

(http://s20.postimg.org/52ks2urwt/NKservices.jpg)

Cheers tim, that does look good. Which app or software was that done on?
I must admit ive raced into getting this site done, mostly as i want to heavily promote my pressure washing side of business whilst everyones wanting gardens done. When i came to do title page i got a little undone as my normal water fed pole logo and header doesnt quite portray that side of business and so i need to spend some time re designing what logo i want to portray all the services which i offer.
Title: Re: 2nd attempt, feedback appreciated
Post by: Rob clarke on June 08, 2016, 10:53:17 pm
in some causes can cause health n safety issues of causing a dangerous slip hazard.

Just took that off your website Nathan, should it say "in some cases" rather than in some causes? Don't take offence just trying to help you.

Rob
Title: Re: 2nd attempt, feedback appreciated
Post by: nathankaye on June 08, 2016, 10:59:04 pm
Quote from: Rob clarke on June 08, 2016, 10:53:17 pm
in some causes can cause health n safety issues of causing a dangerous slip hazard.

Just took that off your website Nathan, should it say "in some cases" rather than in some causes? Don't take offence just trying to help you.

Rob

No offense taken. My ickle girl was born a couple of weeks bk n had wk in hospital with scare of meningitis. So i was typing this out during early mornings of long nights. So grammar n spelling mistakes highlighted i appreciate as now whenni read it, its still what i had in my head rather than actually reading individual words. If that makes sense  ::)roll
So any help n advice is apppreciated
Title: Re: 2nd attempt, feedback appreciated
Post by: Rob clarke on June 08, 2016, 11:04:14 pm
No worries mate and hope your daughter is Ok, I've got 2 young daughters 6 & 4 and can understand how bad of a time that must of been for you.
Title: Re: 2nd attempt, feedback appreciated
Post by: Tim James on June 09, 2016, 09:04:15 am
Was done in Photoshop Nathan.  Done another quickie for you that you're welcome to use if wanted before you get one done.  http://s20.postimg.org/8tucp65l9/image.jpg