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UK Window Cleaning Forum => Window Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: Klean07 on April 08, 2016, 01:08:10 pm

Title: My new website! Honest remarks please?
Post by: Klean07 on April 08, 2016, 01:08:10 pm
http://www.kkleanwindowcleaning.co.uk/
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Post by: SeanK on April 08, 2016, 01:36:48 pm
I like it, best of luck.
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Post by: tlwcs on April 08, 2016, 01:43:01 pm
Your banner says 3 million pl and the key point says 2 million.
very good though
Tony
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Post by: Marc Stock on April 08, 2016, 02:38:45 pm
Looks great.

I gotta get my website sorted out.

Its naff
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Post by: EandM on April 08, 2016, 04:33:32 pm
Commercial Cleaning
Travelling less between jobs means we have less overheads and having already been chosen to carry out work for other businesses in your area then other businesses are happy with our prices and you can be rest assured you will have chosen the right company.


Sentence structure is a little clumsy. How about:

 Commercial Cleaning
Less travelling  between jobs means that we have fewer overheads and  as other businesses have already selected us to carry out work  in your area then you can be assured  that you have chosen  the right company.

(or something like that :) )

Great site !

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Post by: EandM on April 08, 2016, 04:35:27 pm
Residential Cleaning
Residential Window Cleaning or otherwise known as Domestic Window Cleaning is carried out by us using water-fed poles. It is important you find a window cleaner who has been approved or recommended, provides a professional and reliable service and someone

Someone...?
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Post by: nathankaye on April 08, 2016, 06:19:11 pm
Apart from some grammatical errors, as highlighted in the above two threads. It is quite a good web page, beats mine on facebook anyway!
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Post by: NWH on April 08, 2016, 06:31:31 pm
I like it very good.
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Post by: AuRavelling79 on April 08, 2016, 08:54:17 pm
Very nice.

Home page "Facia's" should read "Fascias".

"What we do - residential column" appears to have a line missing at the bottom. Maybe these could be more succinct?

Other paragraphs under services need proof reading and reducing in wordiness (IMO).

Just an example - I wouldn't (under Commercial Cleaning) tell the prospect that there are "so many window cleaners out there" - it implies we are two-a-penny!

Do prospective customers really need to be informed that domestic and residential are the same thing?

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Post by: Stoots on April 08, 2016, 09:35:43 pm
Looks decent.

Not the best ive ever seen, but not the worst, decent enough

Its a window cleaning website and seems to cover the basics so thats that
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Post by: Smurf on April 09, 2016, 09:48:19 am
"Want a competitive quote in Stourbridge or surrounding areas?" Can be taken by some as cheap so will expect the price to be so.
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Post by: SB Cleaning on April 09, 2016, 12:27:40 pm
Looks good...

I would change your sediment filter though...disgusting ;D
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Post by: Klean07 on April 10, 2016, 09:07:57 pm
Thanks for your input guys its appreciated!
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Post by: johnny bravo on April 10, 2016, 09:29:43 pm
are you using any water in your video,    have you been taking speed, or an enhanced  suplement to make you work that fast. ;D ;)
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Post by: Tosh on April 10, 2016, 10:33:10 pm
This is why he'll never be picked for the WFP event in the Olympics for England, he's obviously on some sort of illegal supplement.
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Post by: dazmond on April 11, 2016, 08:33:43 am
i like the look of it but your grammar/spelling is poor(like a lot of window cleaners websites).change a few words here and there and get someone to spell check it properly and itll be a very good website.