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Title: Ideas Please
Post by: HALTON on July 08, 2015, 04:12:42 pm
(http://www.cleanitup.co.uk/smf/1436375979_Flyer1 A5.jpg)
Here is my leaflet at the moment that i have designed.
I am wanting to keep this design as the front and am looking to get print on the back
Any ides of what to put was thinking payment options what else.
If anyone would like to share there leaflet please post it for ideas
Middle picture is to be improved before print
Thanks
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: robbo333 on July 08, 2015, 04:42:31 pm
Hi Halton, did you get my email regarding your website?
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: 8weekly on July 08, 2015, 04:52:25 pm
Window Cleaning Service is too small. It should be the first thing to catch the eye.
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: HALTON on July 08, 2015, 04:54:01 pm
Hi Halton, did you get my email regarding your website?
hi
i did reply
thanks
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: HALTON on July 08, 2015, 05:02:17 pm
Window Cleaning Service is too small. It should be the first thing to catch the eye.
thanks for info so how would you put this as you say its too small
if you was to alter it were and how would you put it?
Thanks
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: Jon_Phelps on July 08, 2015, 05:07:13 pm
i posted one of my leaflets on a previous thread of yours as an example.

id remove the tag line "our business is cleaning your home or business"  as the word business has been repeated in one sentence.

try re-phrasing it. perhaps using residential and commercial.

Spacing on the telephone number - 0800  772  3638 or 08007  72  36  38 or 08007  723  638.  makes it easier to read

i wouldn't use stock images either.  put some of you working or perhaps your van etc?

its the little touches that make all the difference.

jon
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: HALTON on July 08, 2015, 05:15:49 pm
i posted one of my leaflets on a previous thread of yours as an example.

id remove the tag line "our business is cleaning your home or business"  as the word business has been repeated in one sentence.

try re-phrasing it. perhaps using residential and commercial.

Spacing on the telephone number - 0800  772  3638 or 08007  72  36  38 or 08007  723  638.  makes it easier to read

i wouldn't use stock images either.  put some of you working or perhaps your van etc?

its the little touches that make all the difference.

jon
Hi
Yes i have taken your leaflet on board and was looking for some more ideas
Thanks
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: Pete Thompson on July 08, 2015, 05:40:44 pm
Really nice leaflet

but...

The middle image belongs to ionics.

You can't use it if you don't have their permission.

Other than that, I think it's really good.
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: HALTON on July 08, 2015, 05:50:27 pm
Really nice leaflet

but...

The middle image belongs to ionics.

You can't use it if you don't have their permission.

Other than that, I think it's really good.
Oh I didn't know that better change image before print then. :'(
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: robbo333 on July 08, 2015, 06:44:33 pm
Hi Halton, did you get my email regarding your website?
hi
i did reply
thanks

Sorry mate I never got your reply.
Perhaps you could email me at probinsonstudio@gmail.com
Thanks
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: HALTON on July 08, 2015, 06:48:31 pm
Hi Halton, did you get my email regarding your website?
hi
i did reply
thanks

Sorry mate I never got your reply.
Perhaps you could email me at probinsonstudio@gmail.com
Thanks
that's the email i did send to.
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: 8weekly on July 08, 2015, 06:55:30 pm
Window Cleaning Service is too small. It should be the first thing to catch the eye.
thanks for info so how would you put this as you say its too small
if you was to alter it were and how would you put it?
Thanks

In place of your logo & company name.
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: ascjim on July 08, 2015, 07:00:16 pm
Use your own pics
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: robbo333 on July 08, 2015, 07:12:05 pm
Hi Halton, did you get my email regarding your website?
hi
i did reply
thanks

Sorry mate I never got your reply.
Perhaps you could email me at probinsonstudio@gmail.com
Thanks
that's the email i did send to.

Perhaps there was a problem. If you want to send it again that's great, if not no worries.
Cheers
Robbo
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: wpclean on July 08, 2015, 09:13:05 pm
Lose the freephone number ( they just attract price shoppers ) Put a land line number, and print both sides, and whichever way it falls on the mat they will be dazzled by you snazzy  add !
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: wpclean on July 08, 2015, 09:14:39 pm
Also make your name much smaller, and enlarge "window cleaning " so it stands out and they know straight away what you are offering.
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: HALTON on July 08, 2015, 09:18:14 pm
Lose the freephone number ( they just attract price shoppers ) Put a land line number, and print both sides, and whichever way it falls on the mat they will be dazzled by you snazzy  add !
This is what i am saying i need ideas for the second side
As i like the front but maybe a few changes like live photos but bit hard as i work alone
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: wpclean on July 08, 2015, 10:32:34 pm
You are over thinking it, double sided with a simple message does the trick . . . . .and expect a 0.5 return on a good day !
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: dazmond on July 09, 2015, 08:45:56 am
id put pics of yourself cleaning windows instead of stock photos and one next to your van smiling with arms folded(poles left in the van!)

make the "window cleaning services" bigger and your name smaller

id also lose the freephone number and just put your mobile number

on the back id put a list of other services you offer(conny roofs,f/s/g and solar panel cleaning for example)
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: HALTON on July 09, 2015, 03:08:50 pm
Hi guys
Thinking of getting a new flyer designed.
And was asked what text I wanted putting on it .
Can someone give me ideas
Thanks
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: HALTON on July 10, 2015, 01:32:33 pm
How about this one images are for illustration only as images of me cleaning will be used.
also the telephone umber will be changed to a landline?
Thanks
(http://www.cleanitup.co.uk/smf/1436531533_wd.jpg)
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: HALTON on July 10, 2015, 06:26:06 pm
anyone?
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: 8weekly on July 10, 2015, 06:38:39 pm
anyone?
Better but in my opinion it should be

WINDOW CLEANING SERVICE
Haton services,
Commercial and domestic.
call 0909 876787 for a quote
That sort of thing anyway. Most people will get 2 seconds look if that before it's binned.
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: HALTON on July 10, 2015, 07:24:15 pm
anyone?
Better but in my opinion it should be

WINDOW CLEANING SERVICE
Haton services,
Commercial and domestic.
call 0909 876787 for a quote
That sort of thing anyway. Most people will get 2 seconds look if that before it's binned.
ok thanks any thing else
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: David Kent @ KentKleen on July 10, 2015, 07:36:49 pm
Lose the pictures!
Add a 'typical price' list!
Land line and mobile, forget about the free phone!
Add a USP! (why use you)
Find us on facebook!
Font and style the same as your van sign writing! (to build your brand identity)
That should do it.
Regards, David.

Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: HALTON on July 10, 2015, 08:08:05 pm
What if i put were the do some thing about it paragraph

Why Choose Us?
orange diamond like left paragraph
Regular,reliable window cleaning service
Professional and friendly service.
Fully uniformed staff
Fully insured
Tried and trusted traditional and water fed pole methods.

As stated pics are for illustration only and will be adding landline once designe is sorted
Thanks all for help
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: HALTON on July 10, 2015, 11:30:28 pm
Any one else
Thanks
Title: Re: Ideas Please
Post by: HALTON on July 11, 2015, 09:29:36 am
any better with why chose us or wit the paragraph as above?
(http://www.cleanitup.co.uk/smf/1436603359_coma.jpg)