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UK General Cleaning Forum => General Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: wpclean on May 16, 2015, 05:50:15 am

Title: Van graphic's feedback please
Post by: wpclean on May 16, 2015, 05:50:15 am
Getting the bus some new graphics, would appreciate any feedback please.
Title: Re: Van graphic's feedback please
Post by: martinw on May 16, 2015, 07:55:07 am
phone numbers need to be bigger than services which need in turn upsizing , your logo could be a bit smaller on sides but defo on back doors no need to have huge logo and unreadable lettering below. webpage much bigger.
Title: Re: Van graphic's feedback please
Post by: Mike Halliday on May 16, 2015, 04:38:23 pm
I think ... 'Advanced jet cleaning solutions'  is a meaningless phrase  and is wasted space on the van.

'Always available  to give free quotes' is a better tagline

Your web address could be twice as long & big
Title: Re: Van graphic's feedback please
Post by: Smudger on May 16, 2015, 06:10:09 pm
Lose the comma and capitalise cleaning

Otherwise I think that is very nice

Darran
Title: Re: Van graphic's feedback please
Post by: wpclean on May 16, 2015, 06:10:54 pm
Thanks guys, appreciate your advice.
Title: Re: Van graphic's feedback please
Post by: Rob@Blast off on May 16, 2015, 08:39:27 pm
Nice, had mine done a while back and had some good jobs from people seeing us out and about.
Title: Re: Van graphic's feedback please
Post by: wpclean on June 09, 2015, 09:10:03 am
Isn't she beautiful, isn't she loverleeeey  . . . . . . . ;D

Title: Re: Van graphic's feedback please
Post by: wpclean on June 09, 2015, 09:12:20 am
No Bitchy sarcastic comments please, I am a very sensitive, and caring soul  ;D
Title: Re: Van graphic's feedback please
Post by: Jettaway on June 09, 2015, 09:57:37 am
Guess its too late now but "Driveway, and patio cleaning"  Needed a grammar check, no commas before an "and"  Also I would have capitalised Patio Cleaning.

Aside from that, the design looks great bud
Title: Re: Van graphic's feedback please
Post by: wpclean on June 09, 2015, 11:11:06 am
Thank you  ;D
Title: Re: Van graphic's feedback please
Post by: Kev Martin on June 09, 2015, 11:47:49 am
Very nice I like it!  Plain & Simple
Title: Re: Van graphic's feedback please
Post by: Mike Halliday on June 09, 2015, 04:22:16 pm
Guess its too late now but "Driveway, and patio cleaning"  Needed a grammar check, no commas before an "and"  Also I would have capitalised Patio Cleaning.

Aside from that, the design looks great bud

Go back and have them steam off the comma and replace it with an 'S'

they should do it for free, as professionals they should have never let a basic grammatical mistake like that get past them, even if you signed off a proof of it
Title: Re: Van graphic's feedback please
Post by: robbo333 on June 09, 2015, 05:37:25 pm
I used to do vehicle graphics and I agree with the above. They should have mentioned about the comma, (that's why you employ them) get them to sort it because the rest is pretty good.
They can get rid of the comma and the word 'and'. Reprint a new word 'and' and then space it centrally (it should look ok if they are good).
Title: Re: Van graphic's feedback please
Post by: wpclean on June 09, 2015, 07:39:28 pm
I will ask them to sort that out, there is a crease in one of the letters also .

Thanks for the advice lads  ;D
Title: Re: Van graphic's feedback please
Post by: KS Cleaning on June 09, 2015, 10:12:11 pm
Whilst it's back In I would also be asking them to align the phone numbers
Title: Re: Van graphic's feedback please
Post by: wpclean on June 10, 2015, 04:48:50 am
Thinking of changing the " all work fully guaranteed and insured "  to  " pressure washing services " ?
Title: Re: Van graphic's feedback please
Post by: richywilts on June 11, 2015, 11:10:06 am
i think the design looks great nice and contempory bar the obvious points people have mentioned