Clean It Up
UK Window Cleaning Forum => Window Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: poleman on March 21, 2014, 09:48:40 pm
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Got a new website need feed back as close to up loading online
www.dorset-window-cleaning.co.uk/Poolecleaning.co.uk/index.html
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Yep she will work for you.
Pity about the guy in the uniform though. lol
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I hope you find the missing apostrophe.
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Pity about the guy in the uniform though. lol
thats me lol ;D
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I hope you find the missing apostrophe.
give just a clue ;)
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Andys should be Andy's.
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Andys should be Andy's.
oh couldnt see for looking lol will tell Nat
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If it belongs to Andy then it should have a '.
Maybe there are lots of Andys?
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Simple and straight to the point! Exactly how i want mine when i get one sorted.
Do you mind if i asked roughly what price you paid for it?? Just so i can get a rough idea what i will need:)
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Another nice site by mr jones
Good stuff poleman
Darran
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Simple and straight to the point! Exactly how i want mine when i get one sorted.
Do you mind if i asked roughly what price you paid for it?? Just so i can get a rough idea what i will need:)
Nat pricing starts at £400 with full seo
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I hope you find the missing apostrophe.
See if you can spot anything else,.. the proof reader is dragging her heels on this one & I prob won't hear back till monday!
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Great looking website, simple & straight to the point, especially like the skyvac video very informative.
Do you power the skyvac with a generater or the customers electricity?
Well done Nathanael, another good website. :)
Kind Regards
Lal
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Just had a good look and i am rubbish with spelling and grammar. Looks ok to me!
Only one issue i found highly annoying was the bit.
WHY
CHOOSE ME?
I'm regular and reliable
I'm local and well known
I'm experienced
I'm fully insured
I always put the customer first
100% satisfaction guarantee
When hovering over each checkpoint it turns white..So on a white background the words disappear. I think they should have turned to a different colour and not white. But not my website :)
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(http://www.cleanitup.co.uk/smf/1395482906_Untitledjj.jpg)
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Spelling mistake
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The high power vacuum sucks dirt out of gutters up to 40ft high and collects it in the drum fo easy, mess-free disposal. The camera system allows me to check the gutters as I clean and make sure nothing gets missed.
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I like it. :)
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Please send me a free pen or hat.
Thank you.
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Thanks Pure H2O!
Fixing those bits now. :)
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I was helping not mocking, as my posts do come across me taking the **** lol
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I was helping not mocking, as my posts do come across me taking the **** lol
I didn't imagine you were mocking at all - your help is much appreciated! :)
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Nat could you have a look at mine site it's www.peterswindowcleaninglondon.co.uk I've done the seo on it but I am look to give it a update thank you peter
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Nat could you have a look at mine site it's www.peterswindowcleaninglondon.co.uk I've done the seo on it but I am look to give it a update thank you peter
I'll take a peek now. :)
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Nat could you have a look at mine site it's www.peterswindowcleaninglondon.co.uk I've done the seo on it but I am look to give it a update thank you peter
Your site isn't too bad, but there are some issues:
1. Your geographical tags are strange,.. you've got "North London, South London, West London" etc etc - - more people would be searching "Enfield, Edgeware, Croyden, Barking" etc etc,.. so you're probably loosing a lot of traffic from that.
2. Your site doesn't have a responsive framework, so will be hard to view and navigate on some smartphones and tablets - this looses you visitors and increases your Google bounce rate - with over 50% of browsing now done via mobile devices, this isn't something you should ignore.
3. Auto-starting videos are annoying & could loose you more customers than they gain!
4. The whole focus of your site is about you and your services are relegated to a single main menu tab with a drop-down. The site should push your services to the forefront, and it should be the "About Us" type information on those sub-menu's!
5. Stock images don't sell! You need to remember that you're not even selling services on the website, you're selling YOURSELF as a service provider, so photos of you and your team, your van etc on the main pages will drastically improve your conversion rate.
6. Its very wordy - thats great for google, but bad for people. No one is going to read all that in one big block, so you need to bullet point the important bits so they're visible at a glance & break up blocks of text with some nice photos.
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I have sent you mine Nat, if you could glance over it i would really appreciate it :)
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Nat send me a email or give me a call I would like you to fix this and what your price will be to do this my email is peter@peterswindowcleaning.info or call me on 07930829781 any time thank you peter
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Cheers Nat you are a star :) !!!
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Cheers Nat you are a star :) !!!
You're welcome! :)
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Can I just add, its good to give feed back on companies and services us window cleaners use
I have used Nathanael Jones for 3 websites and each time I have been really happy working with him, his sites have been great, has a great attention to detail and nothing is too much problem, if you are looking for someone to build you a website then he comes with my recommendation
Andy
Smart Cleaning
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Sorry to put the cat amongst the pigeons but I don't like it. Looks home made. That big blue background image looks like something from the 90s.
Also who is ever gonna type that hugely long domain and get it right? Nobody.
That's fine if you're relying on people clicking from somewhere else, but if they see your van and think "ah I need a window cleaner, I'll email them when I get home" they get home and then have no chance remembering what it was.
Just my opinion, sorry to be negative.
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Sorry to put the cat amongst the pigeons but I don't like it. Looks home made. That big blue background image looks like something from the 90s.
Also who is ever gonna type that hugely long domain and get it right? Nobody.
That's fine if you're relying on people clicking from somewhere else, but if they see your van and think "ah I need a window cleaner, I'll email them when I get home" they get home and then have no chance remembering what it was.
Just my opinion, sorry to be negative.
There's actually 2 domain names pointing to the website (I do this on most of my sites), one is short and easy to remember, the other is longer but much more google friendly,..
*edit* I just realised that the link posted above is neither of the domains - its just a bit of temporary webspace we we using to build the website until it was ready to go live!
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Also, why are there big white spaces next to the text?
This is what I see:
(http://i60.tinypic.com/2mfl78.jpg)
I'm using firefox by the way.
As I said, it just looks home-made.
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Firefox on a Mac.
(http://www.cleanitup.co.uk/smf/1395575064_Screen Shot 2014-03-23 at 11.43.43.png)
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(http://www.cleanitup.co.uk/smf/1395575257_Untitled6.jpg)
CHROME ON A 26INCH SCREEN
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Nat after his mobile number it says OF instead of OR
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adjust the width of the window and you'll see what I mean. I started with a window about 2/3rds the size of the display and that's what I saw. After I posted the pic I started fiddling with the width and the layout does change. (but a customer could easily just see that)
I think it's supposed to make it display better on differnt screens sizes, but IMO its been poorly done.
I hate to naysay, and I don't even have a website so it's better than what I've got. If it was a freebee as favour for a mate etc, fine. But if I was paying someone to do it for me, I have to say I would at least expect it to be done properly.
Just my opinion
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adjust the width of the window and you'll see what I mean. I started with a window about 2/3rds the size of the display and that's what I saw. After I posted the pic I started fiddling with the width and the layout does change. (but a customer could easily just see that)
I think it's supposed to make it display better on differnt screens sizes, but IMO its been poorly done.
I hate to naysay, and I don't even have a website so it's better than what I've got. If it was a freebee as favour for a mate etc, fine. But if I was paying someone to do it for me, I have to say I would at least expect it to be done properly.
Just my opinion
Ah ok i get what you mean! Mine doesnt do that, but yeah you are right. Looked a bit weird when i messed around with screen sizes :)
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Nat after his mobile number it says OF instead of OR
Thanks! The proof reader missed that one - fixed now. ;)
@ Pete Thomson - I see what you mean, the layout is messing up a bit for one particular screen size isn't it?! I'll take a look at that and see what I can do about that.
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Sorry to put the cat amongst the pigeons but I don't like it. Looks home made. That big blue background image looks like something from the 90s.
Also who is ever gonna type that hugely long domain and get it right? Nobody.
That's fine if you're relying on people clicking from somewhere else, but if they see your van and think "ah I need a window cleaner, I'll email them when I get home" they get home and then have no chance remembering what it was.
Just my opinion, sorry to be negative.
Pete, thank you for your feed back and aim sure Nat has taken your constructive criticism on board and will make some or all the changes, aim sorry you don't like it and you are welcome to have your opinion, it is to replace this website http://www.poolecleaning.co.uk/ which am sure you can see is not as good as the new one! my new website was purposely built to get across that I am a local window cleaner offering a reliable, friendly & affordable service, people love to deal with someone that is local and small and not a big faceless company
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Did you do it yourself?
If so well done.
I learnt to do mine while in hospital for 3 months
www.ccwin.co.uk self taught
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Firefox on a Mac.
(http://www.cleanitup.co.uk/smf/1395575064_Screen Shot 2014-03-23 at 11.43.43.png)
Surely that blind guy in the bottom pic should have a white pole ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D .
Personally i would update some of your pics on the homepage the current pics look dated and taken in a bad light , New pics would look clearer and sharper i think that would make a big difference . Mike
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M & M window cleaning, yes the photos are not the best, I am looking at getting a new camera and will up date them as i agree high res photos does help make a good website