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Title: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: SherwoodCleaningSe on February 22, 2013, 02:20:50 pm
Hi Guys

What do you think of my van sign writing? Do you think it will do the job?

Simon.

(http://i1297.photobucket.com/albums/ag33/simonsherwood1975/VansBack_zpsede50516.jpg)

(http://i1297.photobucket.com/albums/ag33/simonsherwood1975/Vanside_zps0d310f68.jpg)

(http://i1297.photobucket.com/albums/ag33/simonsherwood1975/Vanfront_zps5bca149a.jpg)
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: PAUL ERITH on February 22, 2013, 02:31:10 pm
How many people does it take to clean a window  ;D ;D

I know they aren't all cleaning the window but it does look that way.

Paul
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: roundbuilder on February 22, 2013, 02:34:54 pm
How many people does it take to clean a window  ;D ;D

I know they aren't all cleaning the window but it does look that way.

Paul

Lol i thought that.

It does look good though i need to sign my vans soon.
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: DaveG on February 22, 2013, 02:43:45 pm
Nice and tidy Simon, how much did it cost?
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: SherwoodCleaningSe on February 22, 2013, 03:02:48 pm
Nice and tidy Simon, how much did it cost?

£500 but I did the artwork.
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Post by: Joe Martin on February 22, 2013, 03:03:02 pm
Great. ;)
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Post by: SB Cleaning on February 22, 2013, 03:12:46 pm
Looks weird ;D
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Post by: ben M on February 22, 2013, 03:24:13 pm
i don't like, look like prisoners cleaning windows!
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Post by: richard jagger on February 22, 2013, 03:52:20 pm
I like the results its different from most vans.
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: SherwoodCleaningSe on February 22, 2013, 03:58:13 pm
i don't like, look like prisoners cleaning windows!

Maybe I should add CRB checked  :D
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: wfp master on February 22, 2013, 04:19:07 pm
 nice job. phone number should be bigger & on the bonnet also. just saying.
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Post by: ascjim on February 22, 2013, 04:36:48 pm
i don't like, look like prisoners cleaning windows!
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: PurefectWindowCleaning on February 22, 2013, 04:47:32 pm
I think it looks wicked Simon.

I like the way you have designed the picture to look like the diffrent stages of the job.

You do not tend to have phone numbers on the bonnet sfwc.

I think the phone number could be larger, my van is the same, they made it quite small, but def like it buddy.

James
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Post by: kurt on February 22, 2013, 07:16:21 pm
looks bang on, well done.
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Post by: Smudger on February 22, 2013, 07:30:03 pm
Very Marmite  ;D

personally i think it's eye catching and clever ( maybe a be too clever for some  :P )

certianly get people looking - which is exactly what you want

have to agree the phone  number on the small side and possibly easy to miss

Darran
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Post by: elite mike on February 22, 2013, 07:51:01 pm
brilliant , great job  8)
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Post by: Frankybadboy on February 22, 2013, 07:52:33 pm
very nice job
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Post by: Darranvps on February 22, 2013, 08:12:12 pm
I think it looks brilliant!

Different from most others - well done.

I have one more to sign write - Little Puegeot Boxer - I will have to get on with it.
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: kevinc on February 22, 2013, 08:51:34 pm
looks great,my only issue is people tend to read from left to right,so for me it would be a better message if you were cleaning white frames on the left and the dirty ones were on the right hand side along with the guttering side,also phone number needs to be much bigger-sorry
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: Gray1 on February 22, 2013, 08:55:54 pm
I think it looks good, but agree that the phone number could be bigger. If 'friendly reliable service' were put on to the panel above then the phone number could be increased to fill that lower panel. so anyone over the road five or six doors away can make a note and call you and save your legs.

atb

Gray1
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: Paul Andersen on February 22, 2013, 09:45:16 pm
Just another massively over-sign-written van.

Could be doing anything, like loft conversion, tarmac etc.

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Post by: Pure Glass on February 22, 2013, 09:51:09 pm
Looks great Si

Nicely done

Is that you, Kate n your dad?
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: SherwoodCleaningSe on February 22, 2013, 10:01:23 pm
Looks great Si

Nicely done

Is that you, Kate n your dad?

No just Katy and me, my Dad's bald patch would have created too much glare, so I just cropped and stitches a few photo's together.

Simon.
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: wfp master on February 22, 2013, 10:21:06 pm
I think it looks good, but agree that the phone number could be bigger. If 'friendly reliable service' were put on to the panel above then the phone number could be increased to fill that lower panel. so anyone over the road five or six doors away can make a note and call you and save your legs.

atb

Gray1
exactly the number needs to be easily seen from a distance.
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: sean mcc on February 22, 2013, 10:23:23 pm
Just another massively over-sign-written van.

Could be doing anything, like loft conversion, tarmac etc.


Agree
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: Window Washers on February 22, 2013, 10:34:27 pm
It's different love the colours eye catching image.
If criticising  The orange writing seems to blend to much and is hard to read ( could be just because I'm viewing on a mobile. The extra orange squares are they really needed (they look nice, just can't see the point of them)

What did the van cost I see its new
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: SherwoodCleaningSe on February 22, 2013, 10:56:54 pm
It's different love the colours eye catching image.
If criticising  The orange writing seems to blend to much and is hard to read ( could be just because I'm viewing on a mobile. The extra orange squares are they really needed (they look nice, just can't see the point of them)

What did the van cost I see its new


12k + the vat if memory serves. It was discounted due to being unregistered old stock.

Simon.
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: KS Cleaning on February 22, 2013, 10:58:30 pm
I like it,it's really good,the only thing I'm not sure of (and it's quite a big one) What is the name of the company? Is it The Window Cleaners or is it Sherwood  Cleaning Services?
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: SherwoodCleaningSe on February 22, 2013, 11:07:41 pm
Company name is Sherwood Cleaning Services, but we mainly do window cleaning. Our last motor a ford ranger had the company name plastered all over it in big letters with window cleaning in small letters. This time we thought we would make a point of saying what we do rather than who we are.

Simon.
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: ben M on February 22, 2013, 11:09:20 pm
Company name is Sherwood Cleaning Services, but we mainly do window cleaning. Our last motor a ford ranger had the company name plastered all over it in big letters with window cleaning in small letters. This time we thought we would make a point of saying what we do rather than who we are.

Simon.
with prisoners... ;D
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: KS Cleaning on February 22, 2013, 11:21:17 pm
Company name is Sherwood Cleaning Services, but we mainly do window cleaning. Our last motor a ford ranger had the company name plastered all over it in big letters with window cleaning in small letters. This time we thought we would make a point of saying what we do rather than who we are.

Simon.
Fair point,a wasn't being negative,looks really good ;)
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: SherwoodCleaningSe on February 22, 2013, 11:55:48 pm
I've enjoyed all the fed back, I take the point about the telephone number maybe I'll make it bigger on my next van.  Weirdly the orange goes invisible in the dark, but then that's not really an issue for me.  It has already started to pay for itself as I picked up 3 gutter jobs as a direct result from the signs.

There have been some genuinely funny comments although I'm not sure if they were all meant to be funny, but they still made me smile.

Simon.
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: Spruce on February 23, 2013, 09:33:13 am
I've enjoyed all the fed back, I take the point about the telephone number maybe I'll make it bigger on my next van.  Weirdly the orange goes invisible in the dark, but then that's not really an issue for me.  It has already started to pay for itself as I picked up 3 gutter jobs as a direct result from the signs.

There have been some genuinely funny comments although I'm not sure if they were all meant to be funny, but they still made me smile.

Simon.

As Smudger says, it's eye catching, and that's what the idea is of having a sign written van - to grab someone's attention and then, once you've achieved that, get your message across. If you make the telephone number stand out, then that is all that someone will see in the split second you have to make a statement and you loose the impact.

Simon, I like it, well done.

It is easy to fill the van up with graphics and it gets too busy. Under normal circumstances I would also say that this is the case, but the window cleaner images stiched together on what appears to be the one window confuses the brain and so needs to focus on that large image to work out whats happening. The 'confusion' is triggered with the slightly different image in the middle (Kate). Attention grabbed, job done.

This was my first reaction, and judging by some of the first posters comments, I'm not the only one.

I remember years ago Citroen having to change the colour of the silver metallic that their model range was painted in. As street light bulbs changed to an 'orange' glow it made their original colour silver look gastly.
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: Spruce on February 23, 2013, 09:59:48 am
I like it,it's really good,the only thing I'm not sure of (and it's quite a big one) What is the name of the company? Is it The Window Cleaners or is it Sherwood  Cleaning Services?

I again personally don't see your name as being the most important part of the signage. People need a window cleaner to clean their windows/conservatory etc. The fact that it's Sherwoods is of secondary importance. If the name Sherwoods is synonumous with a qualityclean in his area then thats just cemented another link a person has.
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: Moderator David@stives on February 23, 2013, 11:09:34 am
I wouldn't put a dirty images on my van

That is a big no no on vans
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Post by: alank on February 23, 2013, 05:48:56 pm
I am having my 4x4 sign written end of march all that is going on it is window cleaner + phone number and business name in large white letters on sides and on the spare wheel cover after looking at some others vans I only hope mine will look smart enough now. But i suppose that simpler could look ok aswell.
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: Spruce on February 23, 2013, 11:00:23 pm
I wouldn't put a dirty images on my van

That is a big no no on vans

Interesting - please elaborate as to why you see this as a no no.  I have the greatest respect for you business acumen so ask this is all due respect. Several cleaners have used before and after photo's on leaflets and signwriting to highlight the benefits of the service they offer. In a way its comparative advertising.

BTW, I'm still trying to understand (in other words - the jury is still out) a recent comment you made about all advertising, no matter what it is (negative or positive), is good advertising. Surely that would also apply in this case.
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: Scrimble on February 24, 2013, 12:31:51 pm
looks good, i wouldnt personally have my van like that, the more simple the better imo but if it gets you more work then thats all that matters?
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: dazmond on February 26, 2013, 08:47:01 pm
that old single pointer on top of your roof rack needs a good clean simon!! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

apart from that i think you got a good deal for £500! ;D ;D ;D

looks good!



regards


dazmond
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: SherwoodCleaningSe on February 27, 2013, 07:48:03 am
It's been the most successful sign writing I've done, so far it has averaged out at a job per day, this is customers who are already mine asking for gutter and upvc cleans.

As for dirty pictures, well it's not porn and I guess I should clean my van more often but because I don't the dirty pictures fit in well.

The point Dazmond is one oneofthose indispensable tools that only comes of the van every couple of months for a big commercial on the insides, maybe some moss has started to collect.

Simon.
Title: Re: What do you think of my van sign writing?
Post by: dazmond on February 27, 2013, 08:56:39 am
my single pointer comes in handy for hopping/unlocking gates simon and the odd commercial ground floor job! ;) ;D ;D ;D

i think the wrap/photo is very clever.

its amazing how many of my customers still dont know i clean conny roofs/fascias etc even though its on my van,business cards,leaflets and tickets! :( ;D ;D

your photo will help with that mate.


regards


dazmond