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UK Window Cleaning Forum => Window Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: PAUL ERITH on February 17, 2013, 10:22:58 am

Title: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: PAUL ERITH on February 17, 2013, 10:22:58 am: Off for a week with the kids so I'm thinking about spending some time updating my site maybe adding a news/blogs page ect

Take a look tell me what you would change http://www.erithwindowcleaning.co.uk/ (http://www.erithwindowcleaning.co.uk/)

Thanks Paul
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: sham33 on February 17, 2013, 10:35:05 am: Wouldn't change anything looks great. Just looking again maybe make the image/info sliders on front page a bit slower they change to quickly to read/look at properly.
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: p1w1 on February 17, 2013, 10:35:58 am: i would say nothing it looks really good as it is visually don't know about the seo side , sometimes you can over do things and keep looking for things to change when its not needed just my humble opinion tho.

paul
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: PAUL ERITH on February 17, 2013, 11:01:06 am: Thanks for the reply's i have increased the slider speed to 10 secs per slide.

Thanks Paul
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: john stracey on February 17, 2013, 11:21:46 am: great website probably the best iv'e seen good work.
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: richywilts on February 17, 2013, 11:31:03 am: LOVE IT SERIOUSLY THAT A GREAT WEBSITE
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: richywilts on February 17, 2013, 11:33:06 am: only thing id changed as dont really know what it has to do with window cleaning is the grey outline of trees and houses near bottom of each page
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: Andrew Willis on February 17, 2013, 11:57:20 am: Quote from: Erith window cleaning on February 17, 2013, 10:22:58 am
Off for a week with the kids so I'm thinking about spending some time updating my site maybe adding a news/blogs page ect

Take a look tell me what you would change http://www.erithwindowcleaning.co.uk/ (http://www.erithwindowcleaning.co.uk/)

Thanks Paul

Very Nice :)
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: paul marshall on February 17, 2013, 12:34:35 pm: looks great erith , how much does it cost please ;D
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: PAUL ERITH on February 17, 2013, 12:59:21 pm: Quote from: paul marshall on February 17, 2013, 12:34:35 pm
looks great erith , how much does it cost please ;D

The WordPress template cost $55 http://demo.truethemes.net/Sterling-Wordpress/ (http://demo.truethemes.net/Sterling-Wordpress/) and the hosting is £25 per Quarter.

I did have another site that was only a one page site but decided to do my own as i needed a bigger site and to be honest i didn't want to spend the money as i will be off for up to 12 weeks this year due to two hip keyhole operations so the WordPress site was the cheaper option.

Thanks Paul
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: CLEANCARE WC on February 17, 2013, 02:15:30 pm: i like the line "support your local cleaner"
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: PAUL ERITH on February 17, 2013, 02:30:45 pm: Quote from: CLEANCARE WINDOW CLEANING on February 17, 2013, 02:15:30 pm
i like the line "support your local cleaner"

I see it on another site and thought it was a good idea http://www.laddersfree.co.uk/ (http://www.laddersfree.co.uk/)

Paul
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: Nathanael Jones on February 17, 2013, 04:01:04 pm: Its a really good site. The only thing I'd change is the photo's,.. show photo's of windows actually being cleaned instead of random houses/sheets of glass. ;)
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: PAUL ERITH on February 17, 2013, 04:09:33 pm: Quote from: Nathanael Jones on February 17, 2013, 04:01:04 pm
Its a really good site. The only thing I'd change is the photo's,.. show photo's of windows actually being cleaned instead of random houses/sheets of glass. ;)

That's something that im planning to do this year my brother in law has a good camera and is a partime photographer ;D ;D

Thanks Paul
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: Michael Peterson on February 17, 2013, 04:18:18 pm: i love your websites and branding ( i like richies to ) the only thing i would change is to have my number in place of yours ;-)
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: david washbrook on February 17, 2013, 08:17:16 pm: Erith
If you what to change it then please sell me the site you've got and I will put my phone numbers and logos straight onto it

It looks good

So how much do you want
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: home6442 on February 17, 2013, 09:23:45 pm: I wouldnt have put the non payment threats on the website.
Makes it look as if your having problems with bad payers.
Threats like that dont put off messers and good custys dont
need them.
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: stuart mc on February 17, 2013, 09:36:27 pm: Quote from: Michael Peterson on February 17, 2013, 04:18:18 pm
i love your websites and branding ( i like richies to ) the only thing i would change is to have my number in place of yours ;-)
;D me too
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: PAUL ERITH on February 17, 2013, 10:20:49 pm: Quote from: John on February 17, 2013, 09:23:45 pm
I wouldnt have put the non payment threats on the website.
Makes it look as if your having problems with bad payers.
Threats like that dont put off messers and good custys dont
need them.

Just changed the text a little bit :) :)

thanks paul
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: stuart mc on February 17, 2013, 10:26:22 pm: Quote from: Erith window cleaning on February 17, 2013, 10:20:49 pm
Quote from: John on February 17, 2013, 09:23:45 pm
I wouldnt have put the non payment threats on the website.
Makes it look as if your having problems with bad payers.
Threats like that dont put off messers and good custys dont
need them.

Just changed the text a little bit :) :)

thanks paul

not sure I agree with john, looked good to me, unless I read something different to him, I just read the please pay within 14 days or service may be stopped and I thought that was fair enough
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: LBWCS on February 18, 2013, 08:07:45 am: Really well done
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: David Hernandez on February 19, 2013, 11:29:01 am: Your Website is simply great and cool with its logo and appearance, every thing is ok but you need to change your home page and sub page title tags because it is very large, try to make it small within 70 count and use catchy title.

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Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: JackieW on February 20, 2013, 05:28:38 pm: Very good, well done.
Few observations,

We are based in Erith, Kent covering all surrounding areas( full stop followed by capital W) we specialise in resident (ial)& commercial window cleaning using both traditional methods for ground floor windows (comma) and our pure water fed pole system to clean window’s (no apostrophe) above ground floor up to a height of 30 feet from the safety of the ground. Support your local cleaner call today on...

I would change ''loads'' of customers to ''lots''.

We provide a regular & reliable window cleaning service to all our customers, (full stop not comma)You can have your windows cleaned every:(no colon ) 5 weeks, 10 weeks or just as a one-off clean. Prices start from only £5 for front only terraced house

We use both traditional methods for some ground floor windows & our ladder less water fed pole window cleaning system on windows above ground floor for added safety, (full stop instead of comma) all UPVC window frames and window sills are included in the price.

without the need (to) squeegee or leather off.

If you are not happy with the cleaning results let us know with (in) 48hrs and we will re-clean your windows free plus (plus?)

Also noticed there is no 'detached' house price unless I haven't spotted it.
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: Joe Shanahan on February 20, 2013, 05:53:19 pm: I loved your old Wordpress theme Paul, what was the template name please?

This site looks pretty good too mate. Perhaps while you are off having your surgery you could build a few people sites!
Title: Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
Post by: PAUL ERITH on February 20, 2013, 08:09:53 pm: Quote from: JackieW on February 20, 2013, 05:28:38 pm
Very good, well done.
Few observations,

We are based in Erith, Kent covering all surrounding areas( full stop followed by capital W) we specialise in resident (ial)& commercial window cleaning using both traditional methods for ground floor windows (comma) and our pure water fed pole system to clean window’s (no apostrophe) above ground floor up to a height of 30 feet from the safety of the ground. Support your local cleaner call today on...

I would change ''loads'' of customers to ''lots''.

We provide a regular & reliable window cleaning service to all our customers, (full stop not comma)You can have your windows cleaned every:(no colon ) 5 weeks, 10 weeks or just as a one-off clean. Prices start from only £5 for front only terraced house

We use both traditional methods for some ground floor windows & our ladder less water fed pole window cleaning system on windows above ground floor for added safety, (full stop instead of comma) all UPVC window frames and window sills are included in the price.

without the need (to) squeegee or leather off.

If you are not happy with the cleaning results let us know with (in) 48hrs and we will re-clean your windows free plus (plus?)

Also noticed there is no 'detached' house price unless I haven't spotted it.

Thanks for the pointer ;)

Paul