Clean It Up
UK Window Cleaning Forum => Window Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: Alex Wingrove on March 09, 2012, 04:30:32 pm
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Finished making my site at last! (sort of)
I wanted to keep it clean, simple and straight to the point.
Its up and running which is important the picture of me isn't staying I put it there for dimensions so I would know what it would like like when live.
Needs some tinkering here and there but please tell me what you think. Constructive criticism please
www.integritywindowcleaning.co.uk
Alex
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Finished making my site at last! (sort of)
I wanted to keep it clean, simple and straight to the point.
Its up and running which is important the picture of me isn't staying I put it there for dimensions so I would know what it would like like when live.
Needs some tinkering here and there but please tell me what you think. Constructive criticism please
Alex
Might need text and pictures - apart from that it looks great ???
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I like the simplicity :P
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maybe im thick but there is no link? how do I see it?
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im stupid
sorry hahaha
www.integritywindowcleaning.co.uk
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I like it.
My God you cover a big area! we only cover a quarter of that!
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We moved to Guildford recently so that's why im over there.
Always did travel though, I like change
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what market are you aiming this at?
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what market are you aiming this at?
People who want a window cleaner?
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what market are you aiming this at?
People who want a window cleaner?
funny !!!!!!!
so your able to clean the gerkin in london then they need a window cleaner
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How do you stand at that funny angle without falling over? How Tall are you?
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what market are you aiming this at?
People who want a window cleaner?
if your market is people that want a window cleaner then why is there more on the web site about other things then window cleaning
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I am sorry, but i don't get such a web site. I don't even see the reason of such a website.
No selling point what so ever.
I know your excuse that you want to make it simple, but it has to do a purpose - sell your service.
Think at it as you are new potential customer would you call to owner of this service without any further search for a window cleaner ?
I am in the process of getting my website done, and I can't stress my self enough how important that someone looking at my website DO NOT LOOK ELSEWHERE AND CALL NOW.
as well as
if they are looking for window cleaner - THEY GET TEMPTED TO OTHER SERVICES fascias clean, cony clean, gutter clean etc.
I am sorry if my respond is a bit harsh, but I am just honest.
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I hope you like my website Viktor? lol ;)
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I hope you like my website Viktor? lol ;)
how many windows on conservatorys have your boys broken great pic of ladders on glass :-s
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I hope you like my website Viktor? lol ;)
To be honest, one of the best I have seen for window cleaners :)
(from my point of view)
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viktor i notice your from buckinghamshire where are you based
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High Wycombe
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just down the road then
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just down the road then
you from Luton ?
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just down the road then
you from Luton ?
no leighton buzzard other side of dunstable so not far from luton
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Should go for a cup of green tea one day then :D
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Should go for a cup of green tea one day then :D
more of an earl grey or a fruit tea my self ;D ;D ;D
feel free give me a call when your free one day my details are on the profile page or on my website
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I hope you like my website Viktor? lol ;)
how many windows on conservatorys have your boys broken great pic of ladders on glass :-s
not one ever
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Do you ladies want a room?
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Do you ladies want a room?
yes please make sure you put the kettle on too
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Do you ladies want a room?
amazing how the subject changes! ;D
and i feel thirsty now
any hoo Alex, the contact tab does nothing for me, but that might be my set up, might be worth putting a little form there .
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like i said before who is the site aimed at the would help people give you ideas as what works for dom is diff to blue chip companys
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Do you ladies want a room?
yes please make sure you put the kettle on too
dont forget some biscuits as well ! ;D
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lets stop high jacking this tread its far away from the beaten track,
alex wants help with his website lets help him
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Alex:
Your website needs complete redoing, for more constructive advice you can contact me direct
I can introduce you with some people who can help you with your website.
I know you may have put a lots of effort and thats not what you would like to hear, but thats true.
I have seen lots of "i have done my web what you think" website is crap and everyone "nice", "like it" "well done"
but come on guys, thats not true !
I have once put my web sample and no one liked it - so I am redoing it, all comments taken
(even tho my web site was not one of the simplest one)
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Alex:
Your website needs complete redoing, for more constructive advice you can contact me direct
I can introduce you with some people who can help you with your website.
I know you may have put a lots of effort and thats not what you would like to hear, but thats true.
I have seen lots of "i have done my web what you think" website is crap and everyone "nice", "like it" "well done"
but come on guys, thats not true !
I have once put my web sample and no one liked it - so I am redoing it, all comments taken
(even tho my web site was not one of the simplest one)
So do you have a website victor? :)
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Alex:
Your website needs complete redoing, for more constructive advice you can contact me direct
I can introduce you with some people who can help you with your website.
I know you may have put a lots of effort and thats not what you would like to hear, but thats true.
I have seen lots of "i have done my web what you think" website is crap and everyone "nice", "like it" "well done"
but come on guys, thats not true !
I have once put my web sample and no one liked it - so I am redoing it, all comments taken
(even tho my web site was not one of the simplest one)
So do you have a website victor? :)
not finished yet
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Agree with Viktor,
Work on it, lose pic of yourself, your selling a service not a 'Date with me' you've made it look like a dating website with that photo, sorry mucker, honesty is always best.
Other than that the simplicity lookks good.
I do think Punters would as I did try and click on links on left ( but they are not links)???
maybe more descriptive???
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have to agree with the guys above.
well done on getting a website as they're a lot of work, and any website is better than no website.
you do need to give more information though. people want detail.
read this...
http://www.amazon.co.uk/Commonsense-Direct-Digital-Marketing-Drayton/dp/0749447605/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1331363551&sr=1-1
or this website...
http://www.cardellmedia.com/
they explain what you need...
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Thanks for the feedback. Most of you understood my brief, and offered more than "its rubbish get rid of it"
As I said the picture on the front is not there to stay, its just a demo pic I used for dimensions so I could see what it would be like. I need to take a photo for that space yet.
As for who its aimed at. I wanted a website not so I could draw potential customers to it in an advertising style campaign where people are sold on the website rather than anything else. I wanted it to help with online advertising on Google Yell, etc I figure I can get higher up the Google rating with a website than without.
My logic is anyone who has searched Google or anywhere else for a window cleaner has a pretty good idea what they want and need.
I look at lots of sites that look great and sound great but when it comes to looking for a contact number its tiny or hidden somewhere on a page and it turns into a where's wally exercise.
The only constructive advice I have heard so far is to include some information about myself.
I was originally going to do that. But I thought are people that bothered about what I can do as long as I clean windows.
But on second thoughts it may be wise to include for that few who would appreciate it.
I will make the text on the right hand side into a link that opens a new box on the same page, that seems a good idea
It not im sure someone of you lot will enjoy reading it
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Is that a website advertising a mend catalogue?
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Is that a website advertising a mend catalogue
I take it you meant "mens" whereas you wrote "mend". What a witty retort!
I will implement your advice...oh wait
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Is that a website advertising a mend catalogue
I take it you meant "mens" whereas you wrote "mend". What a witty retort!
I will implement your advice...oh wait
just wondered who the topshop model was on the homepage? strike a pose! ;)
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Is that a website advertising a mend catalogue
I take it you meant "mens" whereas you wrote "mend". What a witty retort!
I will implement your advice...oh wait
just wondered who the topshop model was on the homepage? strike a pose! ;)
lol that topman model is me. its supposed to be temp. but if you like it ill leave it up
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Yeah I like it so much I have cramp in my hand.
My honest opinion on your site is it looks what it is. Homemade, depends what you want from it but it won't bring in any high end work