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UK Window Cleaning Forum => Window Cleaning Forum => Topic started by: Total shine cleaning services on December 27, 2011, 10:52:56 am

Title: Read my advert
Post by: Total shine cleaning services on December 27, 2011, 10:52:56 am: To you it's just a dirty piece of glass, To me its a thing of great beauty, a portal for looking out into that big old world and aspiring to do something, to be someone and make a difference..! Let me help you to help yourself to be that person, the doer not just the one talking about it, Go on make the difference and be the person you truly want to be!!!!! TOTAL SHINE MK 07594 817286-We make you look good in your see thru bits!!!!!

Thinking of putting this on the front of the van in fancy gold writing

Graham
Title: Re: Read my advert
Post by: Ste M on December 27, 2011, 11:07:33 am: Which hospital are you going to be sectioned in then?
Title: Re: Read my advert
Post by: DeLuce on December 27, 2011, 11:46:22 am: What? :o
Just the Total shine and number hopefully ;D
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Post by: rosskesava on December 27, 2011, 12:01:54 pm: Er...... ???

How big's the van?
Title: Re: Read my advert
Post by: Gav Camm lammy 283 on December 27, 2011, 12:12:01 pm: Quote from: Ste M on December 27, 2011, 11:07:33 am
Which hospital are you going to be sectioned in then?

classic fr ste m ;D
Title: Re: Read my advert
Post by: Steve CM on December 27, 2011, 12:22:17 pm: nothing like being short, sharp and punchy is there ;D
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Post by: Paul Coleman on December 27, 2011, 12:28:39 pm: I started to read the ad but my attention span isn't what it once was.
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Post by: concept on December 27, 2011, 12:45:30 pm: KISS
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Post by: Johnny B on December 27, 2011, 12:50:33 pm: I am a little confused. Are you advertising for customers or staff?

John
Title: Re: Read my advert
Post by: Total shine cleaning services on December 27, 2011, 12:55:16 pm: Customers with an iq and a sense of humour
Title: Re: Read my advert
Post by: concept on December 27, 2011, 01:00:03 pm: Just how much have you had to drink over the Christmas break Totalloon?
Title: Re: Read my advert
Post by: Steve kiff on December 27, 2011, 01:20:11 pm: Hia mate,

I like that advert for your website , however I probably wouldn't stick it on my van mate. Way over the top for your van!
Title: Re: Read my advert
Post by: Steve CM on December 27, 2011, 01:28:25 pm: I think it's quirky enough for a flyer but too much for a van. I'm sure it will be read which is what you want from a flyer
Title: Re: Read my advert
Post by: concept on December 27, 2011, 01:49:05 pm: Quote from: Steve CM on December 27, 2011, 01:28:25 pm
I think it's quirky enough for a flyer but too much for a van. I'm sure it will be read which is what you want from a flyer

The drums are really upsetting you, I'm worried.
Title: Re: Read my advert
Post by: Dave Willis on December 27, 2011, 01:59:39 pm: I would put Porthole instead of Portal.
Title: Re: Read my advert
Post by: Steve CM on December 27, 2011, 02:12:09 pm: Quote from: concept on December 27, 2011, 01:49:05 pm
Quote from: Steve CM on December 27, 2011, 01:28:25 pm
I think it's quirky enough for a flyer but too much for a van. I'm sure it will be read which is what you want from a flyer

The drums are really upsetting you, I'm worried.

Its not my style as i go for more a polished corporate angle but quirky things tend to work as well.

I think someone on here said about the flyer that looked like a £5.00 note. Seemed to work for them.

I'm not a fan of all the american promo approach either but some seem to think it works.

Bottom line is in this business the more you work at it the bigger you get. Its not rocket science.