Nathanael Jones

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Website critique please?
« on: January 04, 2009, 06:38:18 pm »
I'm putting the finishing touches on a new website for John Garnett & I'd appreciate your comments. I've spell checked it,... but I'm blind to spelling/grammar errors, so let me know any mistakes you spot!
www.johnthewindowcleaner.com

 ;D

DaveG

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Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #1 on: January 04, 2009, 06:40:30 pm »
Brilliant website mate
You can't polish a turd

Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #2 on: January 04, 2009, 06:41:09 pm »
Good!

Nathanael Jones

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Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #3 on: January 04, 2009, 06:41:50 pm »
Any spelling mistakes were put there on purpose to try & catch you out,......

;)

chrisyg

Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #4 on: January 04, 2009, 06:43:46 pm »
I thought Majestic had a new website? How come the commercial link does not take you anywhere, or is jtwc the new name for Majestic?

Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #5 on: January 04, 2009, 06:44:33 pm »
Theres a gap on one of the pages between a word and a comma, betcha cant find it  ;D

DaveG

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Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #6 on: January 04, 2009, 06:46:54 pm »
and i noticed a full stop missing.... ;)
You can't polish a turd

Nathanael Jones

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Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #7 on: January 04, 2009, 07:09:10 pm »
Theres a gap on one of the pages between a word and a comma, betcha cant find it  ;D
Found it! (Well found 1 of them anyway!)
John isn't changing the company name, his Majestic site is now more aimed at commercial customers, and this one is aimed more at residential,.. trying to catch a wider demographic of internet users!
 ;D

dave.e

Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #8 on: January 04, 2009, 07:50:55 pm »
nice site mate wish mine looked like that.  o well i will keep at it you never know just been looking at flash just need to get me head round it . dave

steve a

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Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #9 on: January 04, 2009, 08:24:21 pm »
Teh FWC certificate is out of date and the iosh seems to have run out as well (i believe they only last for 3 years) correct me if i'm wrong.

Steve a


Nathanael Jones

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Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #10 on: January 04, 2009, 08:29:04 pm »
Teh FWC certificate is out of date and the iosh seems to have run out as well (i believe they only last for 3 years) correct me if i'm wrong.

Steve a



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I'll have to get on to John and upload the new ones!!!

paulscotney

Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #11 on: January 04, 2009, 09:36:44 pm »
I have been on the port but I think expedient should be expeditious.
Otherwise a great site.

Nathanael Jones

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Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #12 on: January 04, 2009, 09:40:06 pm »
I have been on the port but I think expedient should be expeditious.
Otherwise a great site.

eerrr,... I wouldn't even know that one sober!!! :)

2nd opinion anyone before I change it??!!
:)

Alex Gardiner

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Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #13 on: January 04, 2009, 09:43:20 pm »
Under Latest News, John the Window Cleaner needs capital letters on the Window Cleaner bit.

Mrs A

paulscotney

Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #14 on: January 04, 2009, 09:48:26 pm »
Expeditious..................................................Acting or done with speed and efficiency


According to the online dictionary but I am sure it won't make any difference which one u use.

Nathanael Jones

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Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #15 on: January 04, 2009, 09:49:37 pm »
Under Latest News, John the Window Cleaner needs capital letters on the Window Cleaner bit.

Mrs A

Thanks Mrs A,.. fixed now!
:)

Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #16 on: January 04, 2009, 09:54:05 pm »
Under Latest News, John the Window Cleaner needs capital letters on the Window Cleaner bit.

Mrs A

Should be 'Mrs G', Mrs refers to the surname, your surname is Gardiner, the A is a reference to your husbands first name, that by the way is Alex.

 ;D

Nathanael Jones

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Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #17 on: January 04, 2009, 09:55:01 pm »
LMAO,... :)

[GQC] Tim

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Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #18 on: January 04, 2009, 11:32:20 pm »
Page is not rendering the flash content in Firefox, might be worth looking into.

Looks okay apart from that, what are you using, Dreamweaver?

dave0123

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Re: Website critique please?
« Reply #19 on: January 04, 2009, 11:40:49 pm »
Nice site,


I dont think you get a new certificate for FWC each year? well i dont  ???
Dave.