andy east sussex

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advertising help
« on: September 23, 2013, 10:06:43 am »
hello guys thought id have a change of advertising so we changed it from black and white a5 to full colour a6 with our services listed rather than prices

what do you guys think anything you would change or add to it

this is just scanned so quality isn't great

andy east sussex

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Re: advertising help
« Reply #1 on: September 23, 2013, 10:08:41 am »

Chris Straker

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Re: advertising help
« Reply #2 on: September 23, 2013, 06:58:15 pm »
Andy.  For what it's worth, I would re word ......

based in Eastbourne since 2001
Remove THE from before Residential
Put OR between home and work then put comma after work

Just the anomalies that sprung out  ;)

Carpet Dawg

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Re: advertising help
« Reply #3 on: September 23, 2013, 07:04:31 pm »
Got to say, it doesn't grab me.

ian harper

Re: advertising help
« Reply #4 on: September 26, 2013, 07:01:08 am »
Andy

any change you make you must test first and let the results guide you. no good just trying it without numbers to back up any results

if you use colour you must use it to your advantage so before and after images comes to mind. stain removal images as well. showing images says more about you than anything you can say about yourself

good luck

Mike Halliday

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Re: advertising help
« Reply #5 on: September 26, 2013, 07:08:04 am »
Why switch to A6 from A5?

On 10k leaflets you only save £45 might as well keep the A5,

what's on the other side?
Mike Halliday.  www.henryhalliday.co.uk